lord_knight200 1 Share Posted September 26, 2016 Quote Out-Of-Character Information Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! What’s your Minecraft account name?: lord_knight200 How old are you?: 14 What timezone are you in?: GMT+1 Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes Have you read and agreed to the rules?:yes What’s the rule you agree with the most: that your skin must be an RP-friendly representation of the character Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): no How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: a friend tipped me about this server Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): sorry i dont have that Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): yes once Definitions Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial of your application! What is roleplaying?: when you become a fantasy character and you live in its presonality What is metagaming?: is when you use information about the RP world outside the RP Game What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: power emotions is an act forsing the resultat of one's actions on another character , typically without the players consent and not giving the other character a chance to do Anything about the emot In-Character InformationNow you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play. Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called: ligros Character’s sex: (male or female?): male Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.): Forrest dwarf Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 45 Biography (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore.): (where does your character come from?;he comes from the Grand kingdome of urguan// were have they traveled to?;he have traveled to the silver States of haelun'or and through the Holy orenian empire after his parants was killed by orcs //what year were they born in? et cetera: he was born 14/8 - 1532 Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and disspises: he like drinking strong alkohol and he disspises orchs and he has a short temper short-temper Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) he wants his name to be remembered . Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) fighting with swords and axes reading maps , fishing and he is a very fast. Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) he is afraid of hieghts , he is a bad archer and he has a hard time standing still and concentrateing Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars? : he has white medium long hair, brown eyes and a big white beard and he is about 1,57m long with a crooked nose. And a lapped eye Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
garentoft 9265 Share Posted September 26, 2016 Hey, applicant; Your application has been denied. Your definition of powergaming is plagiarised (it’s literally just the same definition as last time) and your definition metagaming is incorrect. This is your second account of plagiarisation, meaning you will receive a one week ban from applying. You can use this thread to get more information about the definitions, but remember not to plagiarise. Your biography lacks story, you’ve really only answered the questions which are EXAMPLES of things you could write as your story. We expect you to write at least two lengthy paragraphs, you have shown from your ‘answers’ that you can find lore. Your biography should have events that your character witnesses, perhaps the death of a parent or a travel to a city. In case you wish to find more lore to use for your biography, here’s a link to our wiki again. Your personality traits are vague, they only consists of two likes and dislikes and the behavioural trait of having a short-temper. Your personality traits are so much more, it’s things like being brave, stubborn or even using your hands to put emphasis on your words. Please add more personality traits. I’d also like to point out that there are a many grammatical mistakes in your application, since this is text-based roleplay, I’d love it if you could fix up these mistakes, as it simply makes everything easier to understand. You may re-apply in one week. If you have any questions, send me a PM via the forums. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
garentoft 9265 Share Posted September 26, 2016 This application has been denied. Moved to the Denied Applications forum. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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