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[DanteTheGuard 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: DanteTheGuard

How old are you?: 15

What timezone are you in?:  Eastern Time Zone

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No overpowered Characters

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):No I understand all rules

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: YouTube

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): I do not have any past Whitelist Application'so

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):Yes i Have as a Soul

Definitions

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What is roleplaying?:roleplaying is basicly taking the role of someone.For example if your in a movie or show you are given a character to be and you take thier role and read the script,but instead you can create your character and lines on the spot.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is a form oF Online teamwork in a bad way. I am on team red and my friend is on team blue.My team wants to attack team blue. I tell my friend without team red able to know.they prepare thier defense. And we lose.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:Power gaming is basicly doing simple actions to attack a player and does not let the player resping or defend

In-Character Information
 

Character’s name: Dante

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human

Character’s age: 27

Biography Dante is a 27 year old man was born in Felsen Oren. When he was younger he dreamed of being a guard. He trained until the sun set , he read about the rules till his eyes shut, he was really deticated. Eventually he became a guard and started a great life he makes alot of money, has a nice house, and got married to a Women named Elain.He eventually had a child of his own.He hoped it was a boy so he could become a guard like him.When he was born it turns out it was a boy! Dante was really exited, and they both decided to named him Dimitri.When Dimitri was around 9 months his grandfather died. Due to injury that haooened at the battle in the land of Aman .After he was 4 he left to meet up for a mission.

 

It turns out hehad to go on a journey on sea guarding the merchants on the boat he sent a letter to his wife saying so, it was not much trouble, there were pirates that tried to attack but the ship defences were much greater than their's,but when he came back things did not go so well.His Wife and Only Child Dimitri were burnt down in their House. People say the cause of it was due to is wife cooking and their house caught on fire. After that Dante is known to be very gloomy and couldn't even think straight. After that Dante got fired because the death of his family was stopping him from doing his job amd the lack of defense.

 

He travels the world trying to get his mind of the death of his family and trying to sell items as a merchant.He Travels around the country seeing if anybody is intrested in buying any of his items.He is having difficulties selling items but he is selling enough to buy food. At the moment, Dante does not have enough money to pay for rent, and could become homeless, but he has managed to stall his payment but now he must pay even more.Dante has not lost his strength once a thief tried to steal his items but he managed to stop him with no struggle. Dante will storm out if anybody mentions his family in front of him.

Personality Traits: Loves Apples, Hates bandits, Working, Animals,Loves Fishing ,Fighting ,Family ,Children

Ambitions: Dante at the moment would like to become a guard Once more but first must aquire a bit of money.

Strengths/Talents:Fishing and Fighting

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Defense, Forgetting about family, gloominess, Gets mad when people mention his family

Appearance: Dante is a beige skinned man.Has Blue Short Hair.Blue Eyes Chain Meal Armour with red Cape

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.) file:///C:/Users/nourdine/Desktop/2016-09-24_17.52.57.png

[Cooliomafia 399]

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Do not fret! This simply means your application is good, but just needs a few minor tweaks to make it better. Please make the following adjustments below in under 24 hours or face denial. No need to make another post, just hit the ‘edit’ button on the bottom! Once you have made the following adjustments be sure to let me know by messaging me via forums. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.

- Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are vague and slightly incorrect, please expand upon their definitions.

- Please incorporate more lore into your biography, such as the places he might have seen or the wars he may have witnessed.

- Please expand upon your strengths.

- Your skin link does not work, attempt sending a link or screenshotting the link directly, if you are in need of further assistance please be sure to message me.

[Cooliomafia 399]

 

Do not fear! This is not the end! This simply means the requirements that were assigned to the application were not completely fulfilled. The following reasons will be listed below. You may reapply after 24 hours, if you apply sooner than 24 hours you will face denial. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.

- Please incorporate a bit more lore into your biography, I don't believe the War of Aman is existent on LotC.

- Please continue to expand upon your strengths.

- Your skin file still does not work, please follow this guide in order to implement your skin. 

[Cooliomafia 399]

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