[✗] My Character

[King_of_Magic 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Rakhi

How old are you?: 13

What timezone are you in?: United states

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The construction and theft rules

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I found the ip from a friend

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): none

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): yes

What is roleplaying?: playing as a character which is not you

What is metagaming?: using outside sources to gain an advantage

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Another form of Metagaming

Character’s name: Zaron Magic-stealer

Character’s sex: male

Character’s race: Dark elf

Character’s age: 18

Biography : Zaron woke up one day in the middle of a forest. He felt sick. Out of nowhere a vampire charged him! Zaron slashed his sword and shoved the vampire into the sun light. As the sun touched Zaron's hands, it hurt him. He quickly withdrew his hands. When the vampire died, Zaron slept until nightfall. He woke up and was extremely hungry. He ventured off into the woods. He found a village called Savoy. He remembered a battle called the Massacre of Wett. It had happened just yesterday. He walked down to the village and when a house was asleep he struck. There was no mercy and everything in that house died. He drank only a small bit of blood and then killed. He knew that to completely drink all the blood was to turn the residents into vampires.

He is now searching for all magic to bring this world to it's knees before him. He has used the Kal'Ordholm siege to infiltrate the city and drink. He now searches for the way to the Nether to join the Undead. He also searches for a way to create large amounts of vampires for him to lead and to learn to use magic to raise the dead.

Personality Traits: likes magic, evil, wants all magic as his, is a vampire

Ambitions: He wishes to become the most powerful being of all time through magic. He wishes to lead the attack of Vailor among the Undead.

Strengths/Talents: dodging attacks, drinking blood, bat form

Weaknesses/Inabilities: travels only at night, weakness to fire, needs to drink blood

Appearance: blond hair, green googles for seeing magic, and a blue cloak

Skin:

 

 

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Under review

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--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED]

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt.

• Your metagaming definition is extremely vague. Only scratching a tiny bit of what the actual definition is. Yes, it is using 'outside sources.' But what kinds, in what situations? Please answer the question accordingly.
• Your powergaming definition does not explain that you know and-or understand the meaning of powergaming. Simply stating that it is another form of metagaming tells us nothing.
• The surname 'Magic-stealer' seems moreso a title than someones' actual real last name. This is not a reason for denial, but an oddity that does need explaining.
• Your biography is extremely short and lackluster, explaining nothing of your character other than that he is a 'vampire.' The application team looks for atleast two welly-formed paragraphs for your biography, whereas you only have a small blob. Try fleshing out your character more and expand on his life; perhaps answer questions such as; where did he grow up? Who are his parents? What was his living environment like? What did his peers think of him? Et cetera.
• Your biography contains very very little server lore, the only thing mentioned being the Massacre of Wett. The Application Team looks for at least a minimum of three separate instances of server lore being used. Server lore can be found on the LoTC Wiki  and can be anything from peoples, places, events, et cetera.
• In your biography you use invalid server lore, being vampires. The closest thing to vampires we have are Striga, which have close similarities to vampires but aren't exactly the same cut.
• You cannot apply to the server with the understanding of magic, magic and other likely proceedings must be learnt In-Game and In-Character through means I.E self-teaching or beneath a teacher.
• You cannot apply to the server as a 'striga/vampire', one must go through transformation/creation of one In-Game and In-Character.
• The skin you have produced is a bit too bold and solid for server usage, as it appears as modern attire from today. Try skinning it to fit the fantasy theme of the server.
• The skin you produced does not look relatively anything like a Dark Elf. Dark Elves have much more darker skin, and usually  more pale hair. Look at the Wiki for more information.

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

Message me with any and all questions.

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This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.