[Denied]MrCoolDude Applacation

[MrCoolDude 16]

i read the lore...i just didnèt read much about the history i just missed a couple of paragraphs in it thats it, i actually read the rest 2 times because i thought it was preety interesting. i told you at the begining that i had to redo my app because i had refreshed the page... i put quite alot of detail in it and information before i just gave you a gist of it right now srry if you didnt understand. most of my apps i do look like this and i get accepted can u point out were i went wrong plz. or cant you give just a bit of a break if the biography really matters someone else can write it for all i care ive wrote a acceptable decently long more than 6 sentances one once and id hate to do it again dude.

obviosly your very busy but can i just ask that you elaborate on what i have to do to make it an exceptable app. like how do i make my biography fit the lore and what was wrong with the format. and what do you not understand about it...

im reposting app because the new skin is in there. it is a viking that i took out of your huge selection of acceptable skins i just costimized it to suit my taste so people can recognize me and for it to look a bit more like a dwarf and i think i did quite a good job! btw how do you know if it doesnt fit the server when you wrote that the link didnt work... :?: :?: :?: :?: :?:

(btw its very late at night where i live so im kinda rushing to get out of here and in bed so see ya in the morning and i will be eagerly awaiting your response!)

-Minecraft Account Name:

MrCoolDude

-How old are you?:

14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Canada

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

Im in highschool and finish work fast. I game alot, cant go a day without it. I Play Soccer!

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

2 Hours a day Weekdays, 4 hours a day Weekends

-How long have you played minecraft?:

Since Alpha 1.0.7_4

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

Nothing execpt Wars, Trading, Friendships. I Have not been on a Role Play server EVER.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

Wars, Friendships, Trading, Teams within Races?

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

The others were not Role Play servers, they were Flans Mods servers. Just typical wars with clans.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

Yes and Yes, twice

-Name the 4 races on this server.

Human

Dwarf

Elf

Orc

-How did you hear about us?:

BlueXephos

-Did you vote?:

Yes i did!

-What was your favourite Law?:

No use of hacking, I hate Hacking ALOT

-What was your least favourite Law?:

I Think All Laws are acceptable.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

MrCoolDude

In-Character:

-Character Name:

MrCoolDude

-What is your Race?:

Hopefully Dwarf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

MrCoolDude

-Biography:

Traveled lands Far and wide, diging holes to bedrock and finding diamonds, fought in many wars. Now i stop at a world, about to explore...

-Character Age:

19

-Character Appearance:

Fat, stubby arms and feet

-Character Personality:

Serious and Hard Working

-Your ambitions:

Become The #1 top trader.

-Can your character read or write?:

Yes

-Can your character mine?:

Obviously, im a dwarf!

-Are you a capable builder?

Poorly

-Can you wield a sword?:

Yes

-Enjoy Farming?:

Sure its ok

-Does your character have any special skills?:]

Eating, I once devoured a world. Turn Coal To Diamonds

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://i1112.photobucket.com/albums/k496/Mrcooldoud/2011-09-17_230637.png

-Other Information:

Im a very serious Smelter, I Respect My Fat Chubby Race of the Dwarfs. Even if some are not fat, they are in the inside, because we are dwarfs.

[Ivrae 30]

I can't deny you myself but your bio is far, far to short and without details, try a good 4-5 sentence paragraph and you might get accepted then.

[Whitebeard 126]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/

[MrCoolDude 16]

http://www.minecraftskinspro.com/subpages.asp?action=authorskins&author=Jackie1st

this is the link i got the link from he made it for this server and even said it could be used as a dwarf

i posted a pic of my inv just like the link you gave me said...

-A screenshot of your skin: Post a screenshot here. DO NOT GIVE ME YOUR SKIN'S TEXTURE. I DON'T SEE ANYTHING WHEN YOU GIVE ME YOUR TEXTURE. This is the second most reason for application denial. You have to give us your screenshot. No screenshot = no acceptance. If you don't know how to post a screenshot of your skin:

1.Go to your inventory.

2.Hit F2

3.Go to your screenshot folder, usually in C:\Users\[your user]\AppData\Roaming\.minecraft\screenshots

4.Go to <!-- m -->http://imageshack.us<!-- m -->

5.Upload

6.Post link

7.???

8.Profit

[MrCoolDude 16]

http://www.minecraftskinspro.com/subpages.asp?action=authorskins&author=Jackie1st

this is the link i got the link from he made it for this server and even said it could be used as a dwarf

i posted a pic of my inv just like the link you gave me said...

-A screenshot of your skin: Post a screenshot here. DO NOT GIVE ME YOUR SKIN'S TEXTURE. I DON'T SEE ANYTHING WHEN YOU GIVE ME YOUR TEXTURE. This is the second most reason for application denial. You have to give us your screenshot. No screenshot = no acceptance. If you don't know how to post a screenshot of your skin:

1.Go to your inventory.

2.Hit F2

3.Go to your screenshot folder, usually in C:\Users\[your user]\AppData\Roaming\.minecraft\screenshots

4.Go to <!-- m -->http://imageshack.us<!-- m -->

5.Upload

6.Post link

7.???

8.Profit

[MrCoolDude 16]

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=10

biography:

i am a dwarf and i dig big holes, dig, dig, dig, i am highly skilled in the way of the dwarf. it has been past on from my fathers father and now me travelling the world collecting all minerals i see hoping one day to find diamond the legendary mineral only the gods have for seen. i now find my self in a new land aegis! were the elves frolic, the orcs wage wars, and the humans... be humans. i found this place in a dream! a vision! the gods brought me here, this is my destiny!

hopefully this is good enough and i will be accepted this mourning! good night and i am off!

[MrCoolDude 16]

Bump if you didnt see it :o