brnavins application

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-Minecraft Account Name: brnavin

-How old are you?: 15 16 in October

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:United states UTC/GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I would say so, but i might make a typo occasionaly.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: During the day i go to school. When I finish school in the afternoon i go to the gym or practice ice hockey for a few hours. Then, i will get on my laptop and game away.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I'm able to play as much as 25 hours a week and at the least 10 hours.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft for about 2 years.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: i know that you play through the role of your characters life and not your own, and you need to act with caution because there is always an outcome from your actions, bad or good.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: i expect this server to be creative in many things such as building, language, and actions.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: only my own (only for friends). This will be my first whitelist server.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes, rules keep order and order is essential for all servers i should know.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves, not including the subraces and Undead and Ascended.

-How did you hear about us?: the minecraft forums, your always on the first page of servers.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: brnavin

In-Character:

-Character Name: Malachy II

-What is your Race?: Human with a subrace of a Southeron.

-Biography: Malachy II is a scribe/cartogropher from a small town named errole. He is named after his adopted father whom he had lived with for most of his life after his mother died in captivity by orcs. Malachy II has had a life of pain and suffering from the orcs who eventually obliterated his home town and killed his adopted father when he was only 18. he has been wondering the relms trying to keep his bretherin safe from the orcs ever sence.

-Character Age: 30

-Character Appearance: wearing a robe, and having great hair, along wwith his cunning beard.

-Character Personality: Malachy has a way with words when it comes to leadership and persuasion. he hates orcs but is willing to reason with them in a time of need.

-Your ambitions: Mallachy II curently works as an undertaker. His ambitions are to become a well known leader and have a family to protect and love.

-Can your character read or write?: Very well indeed.

-Can your character mine?: he is not vell known for this trait but will mine for survival.

-Are you a capable builder?: Building is Malachy's middle name, he pursues in construction.

-Can you wield a sword?: He isn't aggressive due to his great persuasion but Malachy will fight for for his people as much as possible.

-Enjoy Farming?: Being quite patient, his farming skills are very good

-Does your character have any special skills?: Yes, the power of persuasion and leadership.

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4e75908d53e1802823653081992810128452842

-Other Information: i hope you liked my application it took me a while to do and this is not my first draft believe me. i woul also like to say keep the hard work up.

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