[✗] [Pending] 3rd app - by BrainDamager

[BrainDamager 1]

This is my character and i like him the way he is, but i do like you to comment if i need any changes but if im not changing any thing big. Ive waited 24 hours

What’s your Minecraft account name?: BrainDamager

How old are you?: 14

What timezone are you in?: Texas

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: That you shouldn't ruin someones RP through cyberbullying, cheating etc.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): no all rules are there for a reason

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: on Youtube looking for some Role Play server that has a huge fan base with lots of people

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): this is my first one

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): yes am online right now, atm

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Exploring your character, making a story for your self, but add to someones else story. You stick to your character and help others role players.

What is metagaming?: When you get or give information you're not supposed to know about. like getting someones name with out asking someone "whats your name?"

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: Not making your character do things he most likely cant do in real life, Example ____ cuts ____,_____, and_____ head off with one swing

You should say "____ aims/trys...to cut of ____,____, and ____ head off with 3 swings

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Eve

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 23

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Eve was born at Sutica on The first seed (friday) the first of 1567 in the realm of ceru. Eve was a strong christian and always will be. Both his father and his mother were humans, but he is 2% elves, 1% Orc, and 97% human. Where he spent 13 years growing up with his mother and father, at the age of five most of his nerve cells were killed by a affection from a virus. it was a 1 out of a million chance that he would live through it but luck had it, as he lived is life His Father was not a good man, he would beat his mother and him none stop. When Eve was a born his parents wanted his name to be spelled backwards and forwards there for giving him the name Eve. Eve always had loved his mother for as long as he can remember. Eve and his father didn't have a good relation ship. Eve would steal from his father why he was sleeping, But Eves father would lock him in his room to make sure he would leave the house, after 2 years he became a master at lock picking the door and every thing. he would mostly steal money and other goods. Eve learn by his mother, she told him every thing he knows. As Eve was growing up around 13 years old his father killed his mother in front of him. His father said "This is what it means to be a man." Eve still knows all the blood, the broeses, etc on his mothers face. A year went by when Eves father brought another woman in to the house say "kid this is your new mother". Eve took his fathers sword and crawled up behind him and slit his throat in his sleep. Eve ran away from the house he used to live in.

 

4 years went by alone. Eve killed his own food which he had to give up to the local village about 12 miles away for his survival, if he didn't give up the food he would be killed by the locals. Eve made shelter out of wood, clay and stone. Even even had a farm that he would also give half of the food up to the local village As his mother and him use to plant crops togher. Eve study how to become a assassin for 9 years, hiding in trees, and killing animals to in practis of killing humans . After all he was ready for the world after his fathers words this is what it means to be a man. Killing is what Eve thought, but Eve knew it was wrong to kill his mother. He train for hours, days, years. He was finally ready. at the age of 22 he headed out from the darkness in to the world.

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Is great with a sword, Has a sweet tooth, seems not to feel pain, funny human, He is a storngman you keeps his word. He is a funny man with a great since of humar. A little si-c0

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) He wants to become the worlds best killer/bounty hunter/assassin, lives up to be a man, Wants to learn Magic.

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Eve is great with swords, Eve is great with a bow, Eve is great at pick pocketing. And Stealing ((if i can )from houses)), lock picking

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) The topic of Eves mothers death, loud noises, not killing with out for a long time. Can not kill people that look like his mother

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Brown Hair, White, Strong, always wheres a hood in, combat, Mostly wheres black clothing, with a open gash near the left eye. Eve is 6.4 feet tall (76in)

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[Remyy 952]

Under Review

Pending

Your application has been put on PENDING, but do not fret as this only means you only need to make several changes to your application before you may be accepted! please make the changes below within 24 hours, or you will be denied.

• Greetings applicant! you still have hardly any lore in your biography! Three pieces are required.
• In your personality, it states Eve cannot feel pain. This is illogical and nearly impossible in a physical sense, If it is mentally it is not explained.
• People bringing up a deceased loved one is not a weakness, and is very unbalanced with the 'masterful' weaponry. I suggest you change this, to something more balanced. Bad temper, allergies, physical weakness. It is also not explained as to why he is good with a pickpocket, either remove this or have a very well explained reason!.

If you have any questions/concerns don't hesitate send me a PM!

Once these changes are complete send me a PM, and if you require help, I as well as any other AT will be sure to see to that! You have 24 hours to contact me, before you are denied.

 

 

[Remyy 952]

Denied

Sadly your application has been denied for the following reason(s) below, I apologize for the very late reply. This seems to be your fifth application, meaning I will have to ban you from applying for one month.

• You added several pieces of lore yet they were incorrect. If your character had two pure humans (I assume) your character would not be part Orc and Elf. Your character could not have been born in Asul, with the birthdate being 1567. Since the decendants landed in Axios in 1571. Please take this month to cool off, and if you decide to reapply read most of the essential pieces of lore from the wiki.
• You never truly explained as to why your character wanted to be an assassin, you would think that watching his mother be murdered he would be against it.
• Your characters weaknesses and strengths are still incredibly unbalanced, as well as the not being able to feel pain.. please make sure your character is not this overpowered, and has multiple weaknesses i.e physical weakness, disease, ect.

[Remyy 952]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.