[✗] [Pending] application

[Mit 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?:ilovebacon345678

How old are you?:13

What timezone are you in?:6:34

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13):ya

Have you read and agreed to the rules?:ya

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:To preserve and promote a friendly and cooperative environment for everyone, to ensure people feel safe and comfortable within the communityAre there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!):no

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: the youtuber named probablynotapanda

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once):ya

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?:acting

What is metagaming?:Action or method used in game

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:its simplest form is act of any character

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.high elf blue eyes and gold hair

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Elk

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) high elf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 19

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) i am a 19 year old high elf i have blue eyes and gold hair i like to eat bread and carrots i don’t like meat but if i have to i will i was born in salvus that is all so were i grow up. i love the bread that i grow and carrots. my mom would make me cakes too.my dad was a guard. and the i moved out to find a place for me and my future family. i would to find a good person to make a family with but didn’t since i moved out of my parents home well this is were my aveture begins. and i hope i get new friends and find a place to stay and find a girl to have a family.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) a mage

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)farming

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?)climbing trees

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) blue eyes gold hair pointy ears and long hair

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

 

 that all i could get.

[Vaynth 3005]

Claimed.

[Vaynth 3005]

Do not fret! This simply means your application is good, but just needs a few minor tweaks to make it better. Please make the following adjustments below in under 24 hours or face denial. No need to make another post, just hit the ‘edit’ button on the bottom! Once you have made the following adjustments be sure to let me know by messaging me via forums. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.

• All three of your definitions are incorrect. Have a look here at our own definitions for assistance on how you could improve yours.
  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Roleplaying
  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming
  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting
• 6:34 is not a time zone. For example, my time zone is EST. Please research this and make the correction.
• You put your biography in the "Personality traits" section. Separate the two.
• You mentioned your persona being born in Salvus. Which to my knowledge is no longer a city on our Axios map, and also was a human nation. Because your High Elf is 19 years old, they never would have seen Salvus. I will link you to a few places you can read on the High Elves, and where they would grow up on our current map.https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=High_Elves
  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Axios
  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page
• In addition, your biography needs to be at least two lengthy paragraphs long and reference three accurate pieces of server history. Please expand more on such and add lore from the links I provided you with. Try to make sure it all ties together and makes sense.
• You must provide a screenshot of your Minecraft skin in order for us to make sure it's server appropriate. You can do this by downloading Gyazo and using this program to capture a screenshot. Then just copy and paste the image or post the link on the bottom of the application.
  
  If you have questions or need any assistance, feel free to contact me via messages on the forums. I would love to help!

[Vaynth 3005]

Do not fear! This is not the end! This simply means the requirements that were assigned to the application were not completely fulfilled. The following reasons will be listed below. You may reapply after 12 hours, if you apply sooner than 12 hours you will face denial. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.

I do not see the changes you made, and if you did make any they were not significant enough for you to be white-listed into the server. There was no effort put forth to fixing your bio or adding a screenshot to the application. All of my previous points still stand. You may re-apply in 12 hours. Feel free to message me if you have any further questions or need assistance.

[Vaynth 3005]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.