[✗] Kazze the rogue

[Divinephoenix 0]

name: Kazze

 

gender: male

 

race: dark elf

 

age: 260

 

Bio: Born in the 5th century, he is from Reedsborough as a blacksmith crafting swords for his town, then the black scourge took him away from the town and from his mother, as he father

tried to fight them off to protect him but failed. He was a slave to the enemies to make weapons for free and to live, but he cant live like this forever. A rogue saves him from the black scourge as they were in a safe pace, the rogue took him under his wing to become rogue himself. His trainer died of old age and trusted him to take over his work to save the other slaves from the black scourge, he accepts the quest. He keeps his mothers band on his arm to one day meet her again, and his fathers sword that he found when he escaped form the black scourge. His teacher gave him two daggers, the same daggers that he saved Kazze from the black scourge. From the years of being a slave he now can't trust anyone now but people he is friends with. He travels the land, improving his skills so that he can free his people to live long and in peace once again, in a new town of cloud city.

 

personality: doesn't like people that do stuff without asking, likes some people but doesn't trust much in them, only trusts his close friends, is kind sometimes, trust worthy but not that much trusting

 

ambition: he wants to free slaves from there prison so they don't go where he has gone

 

strength: can craft a weapon for peoples needs, good with a sword himself and sneaky for infill treating stronghold 

 

weaknesses: needs to trust others more

 

appearance: he is 5' 10", he has dark skin, silver hair, a black jacket with red trim, with dark pants, brown gloves, boots and a band that his mother gave him, he carries a sword and two daggers

 

 

[_Jandy_ 3519]

Claimed.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED] for the following reason(s):

- Denied for failing to use the entire application format which can be found here.

- Reedsborough is not known to give homes to dark elves, it is the home of the halflings.

- Your character's stregnths do not equal out with his weaknesses, maybe review those.

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt!

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

 

[_Jandy_ 3519]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.