[✗] [Pending] Whitelist Application

[ZayliaDoesGaming 1]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: ZayliaDoesGaming

What timezone are you in?: USA, Central -06:00

How old are you?: I am 14 years old.

Are you aware the online content on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am aware.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I have read the rules and I Agree.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The rule about if you want to permanently want to kill a character.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No, I understand them fully through.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I was looking up medieval servers for minecraft and found this server.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): I have not applied in the past for whitelist.

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes.

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is where someone can make a character and play as that character and interact with others.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is when a character basically breaks the fourth wall. For example, Someone isn't near his friend who is almost dead, but knows exactly where he/she is.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: I do not really understand powergaming much, but I will try. Powergaming is where a character is doing something physically or magically impossible for them.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Serena Acute Quartz

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Half high elf/ Half human.

Character’s age: 21

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): Serena was born to a High elf mother and a Human father in Cantal on April 2nd, 1562. Her father was the local merchant, and her mother stayed at home with her. Serena didn't have many friends cause she stuttered a lot. Life was good until the day her father passed. Her father's shop was robbed and he was there, defending it until the end. Her mother eventually left with her to go to Axios from Vailor. After they arrived at Axios, She was separated from her mother.

 

Serena was alone and homeless, until a lone human assassin came and helped her out. He asked her if she would like to become an assassin, Which she said yes to hesitantly. She trained with him everyday to get stronger. At 20 years old she finally finished training and headed out into the world on her own, Hoping to get revenge on her father's killer and find her mother.

Personality Traits: Serena is normally very kind, but she can be cold hearted sometimes. She usually spends her time traveling from town to town, staying there for a few days, then leaving.

Ambitions: She hopes to get revenge for her father but other than that, she strives to be the best person she can be.

Strengths/Talents: Serena is really good with a bow and arrow, and daggers. She also is good at sneaking around and stealing without being caught.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: She is not a very good socializer since she stutters a lot.

Appearance: Serena is 5" 8 and has blonde hair, blue eyes, and normally dresses in a red cloak with black shorts and a black shirt. She is light to fair skinned.

Skin:

https://plus.google.com/u/0/photos/photo/109412961612469347391/6379427955294654738?icm=false&authkey=CKbosIn2n_S62QE

Tweaked her race, biography and my definition of PowerGaming!

Hope its better!

[Vaynth 3005]

This application is under review.

[Vaynth 3005]

Do not fret! This simply means your application is good, but just needs a few minor tweaks to make it better. Please make the following adjustments below in under 24 hours or face denial. No need to make another post, just hit the ‘edit’ button on the bottom! Once you have made the following adjustments be sure to let me know by messaging me via forums. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.

• Your power-emoting definition needs to be worked on a bit. Have a look at our own definition, and then be sure to put it into your own words.
  https://wikia.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Power-emoting

• Expand on Biography

   

  Please include more important events in your characters life which have molded them to be who they are today. (For this you will need the Wiki!)  Why do they have the personality traits, strengths and weaknesses you say they have? For instance if a characters weakness was they were afraid of spiders it may be because of a traumatic experience with spiders at a young age.

   

  Explain your character in detail.

  Please include more server lore into your biography. Just like Game of Thrones or Skyrim; Lord of the Craft has it own unique towns, cities, creatures etc. Please show you understand the general setting by including some in your biography.
   

• Someone of wood elven heritage wouldn't have blonde hair and such a light skin tone. Perhaps High Elven, as they're known for their light complexions and hair color.  But the wood elves have tan skin and brown, red, or black hair. Also as a note, elves tend to be ridiculed for being half human, due to the fact that their offspring will not live as long as a normal elf. The humans would be more likely to be accepting of her than the elves. This is fine if you want to have this type of character, but I'd like to see it reflected somewhere in her biography.

[Vaynth 3005]

Do not fear! This is not the end! This simply means the requirements that were assigned to the application were not completely fulfilled. The following reasons will be listed below. You may reapply after 12 hours, if you apply sooner than 12 hours you will face denial. If you are in need of any assistance feel free to message me via forums.

-Your definition was still incorrect.

[Vaynth 3005]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.