[✗] [Pending] 2nd application

[squidlypuff 0]

I have not changed anything this edit is only so tell whats going on

 

because i am at the moment sick and have been for 4 days in those 4 days i have wrote 2 biographies browsed for 3 new skins had to go to my computer 5 times im so sick that i should not come out of my bed i have a pretty high temprature and all i get is pending i have searched for 4 hours straight so i could make a good biography i have changed in my other application all the named thing and get denied on the not called things at this moment i want to give up on applying for this server I've tried i didn't get a response in 24 hours i could have changed the things that weren't good if it was atleast reviewed in the 24 hours so at this point i give up !! If for some reason i finaly get some " good/better " help than i will maybe try again

 

 

 

 

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: squidlypuff

What timezone are you in?: i live in amsterdam ( i thinks its central european time )

How old are you?: I'm 17

Are you aware the online content on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: i actually have 2 that meta gaming and power gaming is not allowed

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A friend of mine after i said i'd love to do RP in mineceaft

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

 

Definitions

What is roleplaying?:Role playing is playing as an in game character that you've taught of 

What is metagaming?: Using you're out of character knowledge to benefit you're in game character's knowledge.

What is power-emoting (powergaming)? Saying for example " she shot an arrow up into the air wich than hit him in the knee making him unable to walk " cus than your opponent has no chance or time to react to that and that is just not fair

 

In-Character Information
My character is Daisy she is a Peacefull halfling who likes to work on the field

Character’s name: Daisy

Character’s sex: Female

Character’s race: Halfling

Character’s age: She is just over 20

Biography

my character was born in Willow Hollow just after the founding of Willow Hollow by endwise Pergrin the well respected halfling

when growing up she helped build ships and windmills and helped maintain a good farm this was all thanks to Gilbert Brandybottom at her free time  she would often go on a fishing trip with other halflings and she would often catch the biggest fish of the boat.

 

although she went fishing often and worked a lot on the lands she had never faced danger she had always worked hard and at home she of course didn't see any danger too until she heard a load bang in her kitchen she raced toward the pitching to see a giant spider in here house it had crashed trough her window she ran outside and grabbed her shovel as she ran out other halflings came toward her asking what had happened she told them what had happened and than went inside whit another halfling wielding his bow as they walked in they met the spider and with 1 foul swoop daisy hit the spider on the head the spider stopped moving and together with the other halfling she pulled the spider outside when they had pulled the spider outside of her house she tried to finish of the spider but before she could hit it an elder showed up and asked her what she was doing she told the elder what had happened and than the elder said bring that spider to my house as 4 halflings than picked up the spider and went towards the elders house as they tried to open the door the spider woke up from the hit on the head as fast as he could he jumped out of the halflings arms and ran away into the woods to never be seen again

( i am sorry i couldn't fit 1 more reference of the lore i am deeply sorry )

 

 

 

Personality Traits: Excellent farmer and fisher scared of spider

Ambitions: would love to have her own tavern

Strengths/Talents: good at farming and fishing loves to make art

Weaknesses/Inabilities: is scared of spiders and hates big animals

Appearance: She is just 1.5 meters tall she has waving red hair that reaches till about her butt

 

 

Is this better now now I'm even a halfling :) cus they are peaceful Yay

[z3m0s 1957]

Your application has been put on [PENDING] for the following reason(s):

- I apologise if you sought Halfling lore from the wiki for your biography as the lore for Lord of the Craft is so vast it can be hard to keep up with current tidings. Having said this I regret to inform you Willow Hollow was apart of our last map Vailor, now we are apart of Axios the Halfling base mostly stems from Reedsborough that is up to date if you search for it on the wiki. Otherwise the forums should help with up to date information.

-Hopefully with this information you can expand your biography slightly with further references. Do not fret to much as you are doing well.

-I would also recommend a better fitting outfit for your character as halflings aren't fond of wearing shoes and in general it doesn't fit our theme. There are many great skiners that would be happy to help with creating you a skin within the community once you are setup with some in game money to trade with.

 

What this simply means is that your application is good! Do not fret; however, in order for this application to be accepted, there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. You should not make a new app, simply use the 'edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help or need me to review your application again once you have made the necessary changes, please visit my profile and send me a private message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

[z3m0s 1957]

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED] for the following reason(s):

- You failed to make the changes listed within 24 hours.

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt!

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[z3m0s 1957]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.