[✗] Jarzgo008_YT 4th EDITED

[Varvan Firestone 3]

I WONT PLAY AS A HAFLING(hobbit)

Out-Of-Character Information
Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this
is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

Definitions
Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make
sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of
another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic
denial  of your application!
 
What is roleplaying?: creating and playing as a character, mostly of
a fantasy world
What is metagaming?: extended universe/external factors to the
original game
What is power-emoting (powergaming)?: aiming of maximizing
progress towards a point or goal(non-stop playing until goal is
achived)
 
What’s your Minecraft account name?: Jarzgo008_YT
What timezone are you in?: Eastern Time Zone UTC-05:00
How old are you?: 15
Are you aware the online content on this server may not be
appropriate for children under the age of 13? You won’t be denied
for being under 13): Yes
Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No Trolling
Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so
we can help clear it up!): No
How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: My friend DarkElfs
Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): three or four... i dont remember-->

 

 

 

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/157751-✗-pending-revised-jarzgo008_yts-whitelist-application/?do=findComment&comment=1492767

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/157681-✗-jarzgo008_yts-whitelist-application/?do=findComment&comment=1491777

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): Jarzgo is a small and sturdy and is a cave dwarf. He likes to smith weapons and armor and other types of things. Jarzgo, like most dwarves, strive for power and conquest. Jarzgo doesn't like to pray to just dwarven gods, which they call Brathmordakin though since all he knows in his life only thing he prays to other than god from the westernlands ‘Ownys’. Jarzgo, like all dwarves, settled in the mountainsides of Aegis, in the city of Kal'Akash. 
           Jarzgo doesn't mind when other races, or even other dwarves, make fun of his size for he is very short, even for a dwarf. All though dwarves were cursed to be greedy Jarzgo likes to hoard things, especially noodles... he really likes his noodles, Jarzgo travels somewhat around the country adventuring for best weapons and gear and or materials to use in his life. On one these travels he does he decide to head to place in the westernlands where he met a human named Ser Rolien, they kept in touch and sometimes would have parties talking of simpler times. Jarzgo mumbles alot and some people are ok with that but it does happen to get annoying. Jarzgo likes to tinker with metal, making gears and small machines, people think he is a madman and some say to him "In this day and age we use magic and weapons, simple stuff, we don't make... what do you call them... machines, we don't need them, they make people lazy and slow". Jarzgo doesn't listen to them and tinkers anyways.

 

(where does your character come from?; where
have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)
Jarzgo comes from the caves of mountians, travels everywhere, doesn't remeber(lost his mind after a battle with an orc) 
Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes
and dislikes?) he likes noodles, dislikes orcs, has a habit of having
anger issues, he also likes to tinker with metal to make gears and
small machines, which when he gets the power, will be powered by magic
 
Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) a strong
warrior that sense short then most can get under ya fast in a fight and sense grown up around forge most life he learn different skill from it and to keep in his life.
 
Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?)
Tinkering, Also anything else be need of him if do with working with anything do with blacksmithing, repairs, and tinkering in life
 
 
Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to
work on?) not fast, cant jump high, somewhat lazy, slight bit insane, has a heart for others (weak hearted/ merciful)
 
Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are
they?; hair color?; scars?) 4ft3in, brown hair, beard, purple elder scarf thing, blue eyes
 
Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you
need help, see our screenshot guide here.) 
 http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin-editor/236698/

[Imi 425]

Under Review

Pending: 

 

Please make the following changes on the SAME application, just edited. 

 

1) Please include your three definitions on your OOC information, for Roleplay, Metagaming and Powergaming.

 

2) Please add more detail to your character's back story. Aim for a paragraph.

 

3)Please include at least three pieces of lore in your back story.

 

4) Please expand on your character's weaknesses and ambitions. 

 

5) Please add more detail to your character's appearance.

 

You have 24 hours to make these changes. 

 

 

[Imi 425]

Denied. 

 

Your application has been denied for the following reasons:

 

Plaigerised definitions.

 

As this is your fifth application, you will also be facing an application ban for one month. 

 

If you have any questions, feel free to contact me.

[Imi 425]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.