[✗] [Pending] Application For Whitelist

[CRAFTY_RYAN1 1]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: CRAFTY_RYAN1

 

What timezone are you in?: Pacific

 

How old are you?: 15

 

Are you aware the online content on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

 

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

 

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Be Respectful to Others

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

 

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: A Friend

 

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A

 

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?)  Zadan

 

Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male

 

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Wood Elf

 

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 69

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? etcetera.)  

       Zadan was born in Laureh'lin on the 9th of Suns Smile 1537. He has traveled the Island of Axios in search of new druidic knowledge. He was an only child and spent most of his early days studying and learning. For some reason he was alone for most of his childhood, mostly because no one really like him and many other elves picked on him.  He kept strong and held on for the many years that passed. When he turned 45, his father gave him a bow that was once his own bow. For days and nights he learned and trained with it. He learned everything from his father which made a better relationship with him. saddly thought his father was killed by an orc 3 years later. His death practically shattered his life. For days on end he would sit in his room and stare at the bow that his father gave to him. Soon after his fathers death, there was an orc raid on his village. Everything happened so quickly. He was running with his mother away with his bow in hand. One second she was there the next she was gone. There was nothing he could do but run. She was gone.

        Parent less he ran to Laureh'lin to find anyone that could help him. Before leaving he turned back for one last look at his village to see smoldering flames and hear cries of pain and death. once he got halfway to Laureh'lin, he stopped at a tree and sat there. He had nothing. He had no home, no parents, no food, no bed. After about an hours rest, he got up and continued to run. about 8 hours later he finally reached Laureh'lin. In search of a new life he did only what he knew best, to kill with a bow. Ever sense Zadan traveled to the Islands Of Axios he has worked as a bounty hunter and gained very much fighting experience from all of his jobs.

 

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Zadan is very comedic, but is very serious when he is on the job. He is slow to trust people, but

has a strong relationship with the people he trusts

 

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Zadan aspires to be an elf of knowledge and of accuracy.

 

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Zadan is a master of the bow. When he was a child his father gave him a bow to practice with and he practiced every day. Today as an adult he can shoot an Ork dead in the eye from 45 meters away.

 

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Zadan has dark blue eyes and dark brown hair. He has a scar on his chest that he got while doing a bounty in which an Ork sneaked up behind him. He was born with slightly lighter skin than the normal Wood Elf.

 

Metagaming: is any strategy, action or method used in a game which transcends a prescribed ruleset, uses external factors to affect the game, or goes beyond the supposed limits or environment set by the game.

 

Powergaming: is a style of interacting with games or game-like systems, particularly video games, boardgames, and role-playing games, with the aim of maximising progress towards a specific goal, to the exclusion of other considerations such as storytelling, atmosphere and camaraderie.

 

Roleplay: act out or perform the part of a person or character, for example as a technique in training or psychotherapy.

 

 

Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)

[_Jandy_ 3519]

Under Review.

--- Pending ---

 

Your application has been put on [PENDING] for the following reason(s):

- Placed on Pending because you have forgotten to define Metagaming, Powergaming and Roleplay. (The same major mistake as on your last application attempt)

 

What this simply means is that your application is good! Do not fret; however, in order for this application to be accepted, there are some minor details in your application that will need to be edited. You should not make a new app, simply use the 'edit' button at the bottom of your application.

 

If you want help or need me to review your application again once you have made the necessary changes, please visit my profile and send me a private message simply asking me too.

 

 

You have 24 hours to make the changes, failure to do so without providing good reason will result in a denial.

 

[_Jandy_ 3519]

--- Denied ---

 

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED] for the following reason(s):

- Denied for plagiarizing your definitions. If you are struggling to find correct definitions to put into your own words I would love to refer you to the following Wiki pages.

- Roleplaying

- Metagaming

- Powergaming

 

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt!

 

 

You can re apply in 24 Hours from the time of this denial.

[_Jandy_ 3519]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.