[✗] The blood shed

[IRedDragon55 8]

When i was a boy my father was a wizard and my mother was a witch. you see i was 10 years old and did not go to school they could not get me in there. but 4 years past i wanted to learn magic my father yelled at my mother. they said they wanted to go the well of blood so only one of them can still have magic and the another died and lose they magic. it was my father who died and lose his magic. 10 years pasted and i wanted to go to the knight school she said yes. but when i arrived there there was a attack  i grab a sword and looked for someone who was attacking the school  it was my father. he blasted me to the sky i flew up and down my hand was bleeding out but my eyes were glowing out of magic and strike my father but heart stoped. i fell to the ground but my mother ran to see me she healed me. 

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