[✗] SlaoneJo's Whitelist Application

[SloaneJo 0]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: SloaneJo

What timezone are you in?: PST

How old are you?: 18

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Inter-continental fast travel may be used, but carts from capital>city>settlement is off limits. Inter-continental refers to the boats available at the cloud temple, and not nation owned vessels which have received a travel charter. 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?: nope

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: google

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable):

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): yes

 

 

Definitions

 

What is roleplaying?: playing the role of a character rather than yourself.

What is metagaming?: using info your char doesnt know 

What is power-emoting (powergaming)?:  a character doing anything they'd realistically be unable to do

 

 

Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Akila

Character’s sex: (male or female?) female

Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) High Elf

Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 75

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add three references to the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.)

Akila, from birth, has had a difficult life, cursed with intelligence and bad genes (to her fellow high-elves) she was short, and accumulated fat easily, she was seen as a disgrace, an accumulation of horrible genes from shortness to fat, but her race was facing difficult times, and she had beautiful icy blue hair, a color rare and highly sought at the time. Her parents, to make a quick dollar, sold her into "slavery" though it truly wasn't slavery, she was kept more or less against her will, pampered, but forced to have children to produce her beautiful shade of hair color. These days of lone pregnancy brought her to a philosophical tipping point; Did she enjoy her life? she was pampered, left alone, and for the small price of producing children as often as possible. Her decision was moot as she was soon cast into the street with nothing but her wits, as she had produced a child with the exact traits thy wanted, and she was useless to them.

She wandered from town to town, working as a barmaid or other, less desirable, positions for money. Her life was hell, working hard, day and night for pocket change. It was now when she realized a crucial detail about herself, she was highly desirable to the other races, her body shape, while disgraceful to the lanky high elves, appealed to almost everyone else, and she simply mooched after that. She moved from man to man to woman occasional, simply getting what she wanted and spending their money, because to her, money is worthless if you aren't using it to have fun. She never planned and flew by the seat of her pants (or lack thereof).

Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) She is intelligent, though she subscribes her outlook on life to nihilism, causing her to, instead of working to fulfill dreams, focuses her life on worldly pleasures, she knows how short her life could be, so reserving herself makes no sense.

Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) Happy, and have had as many excperiences as possible

Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) having fun, bouncing from place to place, and not being emotionally attached

Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) she falls into a depression from time to time, almost killing herself on multiple occasions

Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) a pale-ish  high elf with silver hair and long ears, they are only 5'6 and fairly "plump" for an elf

Skin: http://prntscr.com/fj423n

[Parion 1130]

 

Hello SloaneJo, unfortunately we have had to deny your application. There is no need to fret however! You will be able to re-apply in 24 hours and I am going to be here to provide plenty of guidance. As soon as I have posted my response, I will contact you to directly help you out.

 

The main reason for denial is the following:

 

3 hours ago, SloaneJo said:

 

Her parents, to make a quick dollar, sold her into "slavery" though it truly wasn't slavery, she was kept more or less against her will, pampered, but forced to have children to produce her beautiful shade of hair color.

 

 

The scenario Akila is involved in here does not abide by the community guidelines. Any form of forced activity of this nature is not permitted on our server and should not be included in your persona's backstory. 

 

This is stated in the following rule, by former Admin, Thomas:

 

Explicit sexual roleplay is not permitted. If sex (or other graphic actions) occur in roleplay, use "Fade To Black" to pass over the details. FTB actions require both IC and OOC consent. Sexual FTB can not be done with more than three members of the five main races (Not event creatures!). Brothels and prostitution are disallowed, as well as Rape, involvement with a character under 18, bestiality, or necrophilia.

 

Make sure you give the Rules another read, especially those under Community Conduct and General Rules.

 

 

 

Further improvements to the application would include the following:

 

• Currently, your definitions for power-emoting, metagaming and roleplaying are a little vague. I am going to have to ask you to add a little bit more to these answers next time, just so I know you have a thorough understanding of the terms. By clicking on the words above, you'll be redirected to their wiki pages. Alternatively, you can read about all three on our definitions page. Remember to include these responses in your own words and not to plagiarise.
   
• You claim that Akila has icy blue coloured hair. This is not, in fact, possible for a High Elf. For further information on High Elven Appearance Lore, I suggest you look at the High Elven Wiki Page. 
   
• We need to see at least three, accurate mentions of lore in your biography. Fortunately, expanding the lore can be as simple as including information about the settlement your persona was born in or High Elven appropriate details. Helpful lore can be find on both the Wiki and the Forums.
  
  The Timeline on the New Player Guide Wiki Page can also help with understanding when your persona was born and what settlements existed in the map your persona was born on.
  
  Since you are wishing to play a High Elf, the following content may be useful:
  
  The High Elven Wiki Page
  Like I had mentioned before, this page includes most of the basic information and lore for the High Elves.
   
  The Ultimate High Elven Guide of High Elven Knowings! comprises of all of the traditional beliefs and attitudes of the High Elves into one handy thread. While every High Elf is not expected to abide by these traditions, beliefs and values, it may prove helpful having more insight.
   

Do not feel put off from trying again due to your denial! Your application is incredibly well written despite the guideline breaking content.

 

I hope to see your next application very soon! You can re-apply to the server again in 24 hours and I highly expect you to find yourself being accepted. If you have any additional questions or need further assistance, just contact me through the forums.

[Parion 1130]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.