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-Minecraft Account Name: brnavin

-How old are you?: 15 16 in October

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:United states UTC/GMT

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I would say so, but i might make a typo occasionaly.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: During the day i go to school. When I finish school in the afternoon i go to the gym or practice ice hockey for a few hours. Then, i will get on my laptop and game away.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I'm able to play as much as 25 hours a week and at the least 10 hours.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft for about 2 years.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: i know that you play through the role of your characters life and not your own, and you need to act with caution because there is always an outcome from your actions, bad or good.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: i expect this server to be creative in many things such as building, language, and actions.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: only my own (only for friends). This will be my first whitelist server.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes, rules keep order and order is essential for all servers i should know.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves, not including the subraces and Undead and Ascended.

-How did you hear about us?: the minecraft forums, your always on the first page of servers.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: brnavin

In-Character:

-Character Name: Malachy II

-What is your Race?: Human with a subrace of a Southeron.

-Biography: Malachy II is a scribe/cartogropher from a small town named Errole. Malachy II is named after his adoptive father who found Malachy II in an obliterated town overrun by undead. He currently works as an undertaker for the brave soldiers who go into battle against the undead.

He is also know for holding more than his weight in alcohol, but who said that hurt anyone. along with being wise he also wants to explore the world and have a vast collection of maps. Recently his adoptive father died in an attack by the undead, thus bringing pain and suffering to his corrupt soul, he plans on taking the undead out.

-Character Age: 30

-Character Appearance: wearing a robe, and having great hair, along wwith his cunning beard.

-Character Personality: Malachy has a way with words when it comes to leadership and persuasion. he hates undead more than most do, when he sees an undead the monster inside is released and persuasion is out of the question.

-Your ambitions: Mallachy II curently works as an undertaker. His ambitions are to become a well known leader for the for the human race and to prevent war and conflict and replace it with words.

-Can your character read or write?: Very well indeed, its basically keeping himself together. his journal is filled with many tragic moment, although most people would think they were funny.

-Can your character mine?: the last time he mined he was nearly blown up by a creeper and caved in by gravel he hasn't mined since

-Are you a capable builder?: Building is Malachy's middle name, he pursues in construction of large buildings such as town halls and coliseums .

-Can you wield a sword?: He isn't aggressive due to his great persuasion but Malachy will fight for for his race as much as possible.

-Enjoy Farming?: Malachy II frets at the sight of crops, because of the fire the last time he farmed using a flint and steel instead of a hoe

-Does your character have any special skills?: Yes, the power of persuasion and leadership. it comes in handy when dealing with violent events, he is known for talking people out of suicide.

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4e75908d53e1802823653081992810128452842

-Other Information: i hope you liked my application it took me a while to do and this is not my first draft believe me. i woul also like to say keep the hard work up.

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Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

-Contains elements of meta-gaming.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been.

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