[✗] Cartii's application

[Cartii 1]

What’s your Minecraft account name?: IamMiserable

What timezone are you in?: EST

How old are you?: 13 (next 2 months!!)
Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13): yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: No racism

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Youtube videos and friends.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 
What is Roleplaying?: Becoming a character and living in its shoes

What is Metagaming?: Using information your character doesnt know.

What is Power-emoting (Powergaming)?: Forcing emotes onto another player.
 
In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.
 
Character’s name: Xavier Terrell

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race:human

Character’s age: 18


Biography : Xavier was born to a normal family with food and water in the kingdom of Courland. life was great for young Xavier. He spent the early years of his life out in the field outside of Aleksandria just exploring the beautiful landscape of Courland.

As he got older he started to find joy in stealing and robbing but unfortunately he isnt very good at it. The Guards caught him many times mostly caught him red handed. He only tried to steal food and worthless furniture. He slowly got better at stealing. With each passing day he realised he has been spending less and less time with his family. A few years passed and he reached adult hood he promised to give up his antics and try to become a good person like an honorable guard.
 

Personality Traits: He is a kleptomaniac, who tries to steal everything.

Ambitions: To live a normal life by day and become a good thief by night.

Strengths/Talents: Really good at lying to avoid conflict.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Stealing, breaking in, and an ability to mantain a stable friendship.

Appearance: He is an african descendent with dark skin. He has short hair, no beard. He is average height wise: 5"11. A tatoo on his back of a crosssword.
Skin: 

 

[Cooliomafia 399]

Do not fear! This is not the end! This simply means the requirements that were assigned to the application were not completely fulfilled. The following reasons will be listed below. Please take your time to correct and improve on the your application before re-applying to LoTC, as we will only review up to 5 applications in the calendar month. Thank you.

- Your metagaming and powergaming definitions are directly plagiarized from our rules section, please be sure to explain them in your own words and give a possible example. 

- Try to expand upon your strengths, don't only give one example of Xavier's strengths, try providing a few more.

- You mentioned he comes from African descent, although, 'Africa' doesn't exist on LotC, if you're looking for a sub-race that possibly caters to more dark-skinned humans, check the wiki and glance at the few sub-races provided. 

[Cooliomafia 399]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.