[✗] [Pending] WhiteList Application : Awesomeboy4702

[rawilyas 0]

Hello peeps I'm applying to be part of your server, I hope I won't waste any of your time, I tried my best to not commit errors.

What’s your Minecraft account name?: Awesomeboy4702

What timezone are you in?: GMT(+0)

How old are you?: 14

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes I do.

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: I did.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: I agree with the account responsability.

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): No, all of them are clear to me ^^.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: I googled RPG minecraft servers and I found it.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): This is my first Whitelist App.

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): I did.

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is roleplaying?: Roleplaying is every game that you can interact on it, and continue the story.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is any action or method used in game which transcends a prescribed ruleset.                                                                                                                                                  What is Power-emoting (Powergaming) : is an act of forcing the result of one's actions on another character, typically without the other player's consent and not giving the other character a chance to do anything about the emote                                                                                                                                           

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name : Nox

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: High Elf

Character’s age: 54 Years old.

Biography : Nox was born in Ceru at 1587, by the age of 51, He was training in order to be the strongest High Elf, One day a war started between Ceru and Asul, His parents died in that war, he was also hurt in his left hand which is giving him a weak point. 7 years later He found a library full of books teaching things about weapons, stances and the corret way to use them, He stayed in there 3 years reading those books, after that, he crafted a sword and a shield and traveled to Tahn to live with the wood elves, they were surprised of his sword skills, the wood elves were always being hunted by an evil person, they asked Nox to help them, after a tough and hard battle, the other person was scared and ran away, since that day the evil person gave up on hunting the innocent wood elves, the wood elves rewarded him with a legendary sword. After that, he traveled with his precious sword back to ceru and start to help the people that survived, But he won't give up on the person that killed his parents.

Personality Traits: He likes hunting animals and enemies, he also likes being with his friends in a group.

Ambitions: Nox wants to help the entire world and protect them from any accident.

Strengths/Talents: He always searches for the weak point of his opponent, and thinks before he does any single movement.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: He never gives up which is giving him a desavantage, even sometimes he may get serious wounds, and sometimes he is like out of the world, thinking of his parents.

Appearance: He has 2 scars that looks like a bow, he is 6.7 ft tall, he weights 175 lbs, and a yellow dyed hair.

Skin: https://imgur.com/a/usLxv.

 

Thanks for reading, I hope I didn't waste your time . ~~-~-~-~-~- Rawilyas. Sincerely ~-~~-~-~-~-~-~

[Nate1450 111]

[Nate1450 111]

Do not fret, applicant. This message means that your application is good, but it needs just a few more things to make it whitelist ready. Make sure that these changes are implemented before 24 hours of this post, or I will have to deny this application. To do this, hit the edit button below your original post and change what is asked. Once you have completed this, send me a private message on the forums, on my forum wall, or message me in game. I will try and get back to you as soon as possible.

 

Changes:

- Your biography needs major changes before it is acceptable. (The lore/wiki is needed for this step!) You are not allowed for your character to access or use any magic in your application. You also refer to "Asul soldiers", which are not a thing. Asul is a big island holding many nations, so if you wish to include something of the sort in your biography, it must be specific.  I would also advise you to remove the part about the dragon, as dragons are rarely to never seen on the server.

 

- Please put more effort into your strengths/weaknesses, ambitions, and appearance. This is an opportunity for you to describe and make your character your own. A few words per answer isn't going to cut it.

 

- Attach your skin to your application by using the steps provided on this thread. It is imperative that you include a skin, as that is the only reference we have to what your character looks like. Use a third party site that allows us to view skins, or upload it to Imgur and post the link here.

 

[Nate1450 111]

Your Application has unfortunately been [DENIED] for the following reason(s):

- Please use a lore compliant skin in your next application. Make sure that it reflects your character and the lore.

 

 

Do not fear, this isn't the end. It just means that your application is not yet  up to the standards we look for. If you complete the points I have laid out, you should be accepted on your next attempt!

 

You can re apply in 1 Hours from the time of this denial.

[Nate1450 111]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.