[✔] [Accepted] [Pending] Whitelist Application

[CrownedLime747 162]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft account name?: CrownedLime747

What timezone are you in?: UTC-5 (Summer: UTC-4)

How old are you?: 16

Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes

Have you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What’s the rule you agree with the most?: Metagaming

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): I don't understand emote combat much.

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Someone I wanted to play with on CK2 told me about it.

Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): None

Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yes

 

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or use our wiki definitions as a reference, but make sure that you write the write them in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial  of your application!

 

What is Roleplaying?: Acting in a virtual world as close as your can to real life. For example: protecting the King as a royal guard.

What is Metagaming?: Receiving RP information from a non-RP source and using it in RP. For example: finding out who killed you via the kill feed and hunting down your killer.

What is Power-emoting (Powergaming)?: Directly stating the results of an emote instead of simply stating its desire. For example: My sword slashes through my opponents neck, cutting off his head.

 

In-Character Information
Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: Hans Torsten

Character’s sex: Male

Character’s race: Human (Highlander)

Character’s age: 35

Biography: He was born in Mardon in the year 1586 along with his twin brother Otus in an orphanage after their parents died. However, they did not know they were brothers and only regarded themselves as close friends. When they were both seventeen, Otus wanted to leave for the Adelburg Guard. Hans tried to convince him not to, but he left the orphanage anyway. After he turned eighteen, he was considered to be too old for the orphanage and was let off. He instead worked there for a few years until he moved to Alderburg. He tried to make a living as a janitor at a local inn, but did not receive much payment. However, an old retired Norlandic soldier came in and told some stories to curious customers. Intrigued by his adventures, he asked about them whenever he came in. The soldier was very glad to share some stories with people who enjoyed them as much as Hans did and would tip him more than any other customer did. However, he died when Hans was twenty-seven after he told his final story. Despite their numerous conversations, Hans only learned of his last name: Torsten. Motivated by his last story, he decided to take-up his name and travel to Norland, hoping to travel as much of the world as the soldier did.

Personality Traits: Strong, stoic and determined, he rarely changes his mind once he has a goal. Despite this, he has a strong sense of morality and would fight against anyone who harms innocent people, even his friends.

Ambitions: To travel the world and learn as much about it as he can from its languages to cultures and religions as well as its political organization.

Strengths/Talents: He is skilled in swordsmanship and organization.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: Has little to no understanding about redstone mechinary

Appearance: Hans stands at five feet and eleven inches tall. His hair is dark brown, nearly black. His eyes are uniquely dark hazel with green outlines that you can only see up close. His thick beard spreads across is chin and connects to his mustache and sideburns.

Skin: https://imgur.com/a/NWtGb

[Sky 0]

I am putting your application on...

 

Pending.

 

 

There is several things that I need you to work on before I can accept, if you require help feel free to PM me here, or Discord (Sky#2115), feel free to.

 

-Expand upon your definitions, perhaps add in some examples of each.

-Edit your biography, perhaps say you lived in Mardon (instead of Adelburg) then moved to Adelburg to join it's military because Adelburg has not been around for 36 in-game years.

-Add more to his ambitions, while he may wish to learn as much as he wants which is a good thing but what if he had a fascination in a specific subject?

 

Once done, please contact me so that I can check the edits as quickly as possible, else I will be checking up in 24hours and if no edits are made, I will have to deny it. I look forward to see the modified application!

[Sky 0]

Your application has been ...

 

Accepted!

 

 

Welcome to Lord of the Craft!

[Sky 0]

Moved to Accepted Applications Forum. Player whitelist pending.

[Sky 0]

Whitelist application has been accepted, player is now whitelisted in game.