dwarf [✗] [Pending]New application

[xLqved 4]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication!

 

What’s your Minecraft Account Name?: My Minecraft Account Name is xLqved

How old are you?: I am 10

Are you aware the server is PG-13 (You won’t be denied for being under 13): Yes, I am aware that this server is PG-13.

Have you applied to this server before? (Please link all past applications) my other two were using the wrong format, so they aren’t actual applications that could be accepted

 you read and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I have read and agree to the rules.

What’s the rule you agree with the most?:  

• In order to engage in PvP you must have sufficient roleplay to do so, even if a player is running from ‘Halt!’ you may not PvP them. If the roleplay beforehand is major (e.g. a conflict) and they run from roleplay you may drop them but you must revive them. 

Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense?(If so we can help clear it up! You will not be denied for having a question on the rules): all The rules make sense

How did you find out about Lord of the Craft? I found it from my brother

 

Definitions

Feel free to Google the answers or browse our forums, but make sure that you write the reply in your own words, not those of another website or person!

 

What is roleplaying?:  Roleplaying is the acting or pretending of someone or something that is not you.

What is metagaming?: Metagaming is having your roleplaying character know something they wouldnt.

What is powergaming?: Powergaming is roleplaying within chat and not giving the other person a chance to pick something. A style of interacting or communicating in gamees

 

 

In-Character Information

Now you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play.

 

Character’s name: I am Pascal frostbeard

Character’s gender: I am a Male.

Character’s race: I am a mountain dwarf

Character’s age: I am 84

 

Biography  (Please make it a decent two paragraphs long. Remember to add server lore, and events that happened to your character so that they don’t contradict history.): (I am doing it as if Pascal was writing this. )

 

    I am Pascal frostbeard I am mountain dwarf  of the Age of 52, Im a male. I am very smart. I grew up in a nation called Alban. I did not stay there for long though! As of right now, i am 84, i live in a castle in the middle of jornheim with all the other frostbeards. This is my opinion. I hope to succeed  in the use of  magic. I hate everything and everyone impure and imperfect. I do not like to settle things with war. Most likely because I am a wimp and I horrible at pvp. But sometimes high elves can team together with dwarfs and beat a Olog with use of their inteligence. I am very mature for my age. I love the outdoors and learning things I did not know. I am a extroverted guy.  I like to talk to other dwarves I love to write. My main way of communicating is letters if I am not talking to the person face to face.

    I am an orphan. I  don’t like orcs. I hate Ologs the most. I still do hate Elves. Humans are ok but some are just horrible. I hate everything and everyone impure and imperfect. Humans are almost as stupid as orcs. They live puny lives and think they are so smart and can beat every race. I think not. On my 84th birthday, though, elves from ceru. I knew they didnt belong here because of their accent. They were very smart high elves, and they started a war. The elves from Tahn are allies, but the ceru ones are not. Since i grew up in alban, i knew everyone there. And the people i knew most, that talked to me every day, that helped me when i was sailing to the wrong world the ones i know most, helped me fight off the high elves invading our territory, and every day after that, i hated ceru, loved alban,and i loved the ones from tahn.. I still hate Ologs the most... They are the ones who allied with the elves, and the are very strong, so we dwarves and allies barely managed to win the war. Ologs ar the ones who killed most people in our side. We almost lost our territory because of the violent ologs. My parents (im an orphan so i have adopted parents) saw the battle the whole time... But not one thing they could do. The ologs and elves had trapped them. It was after this time that my parents had told me i was adopted...  I am a loving dwarf, i never have started a war with anyone. I only have ended them. I am 84, but i am not old, because 84 is pretty young i dwarf years. I am very small, 3 feet and 11 inches, my father is 4 feet, 3 inches, and my mother is 4 feet and 1 inch. I am pretty average, compared to other mountain dwarves. I am sure i will exell in magic. I am a librarian, and a writer, so basicly i write books for my own library. The Frostbeards are usually writers and librarians, and that has passed on to me. I live up high in the mountains, there is a decent sized path that will lead right up to the othre kinds f dwarves. "I, Pascal Frostbeard, will always    succeed in all things i have set out to do, i am determined in many things. And i am a goof friend to all, and for the most important thing, i am very faithful.                                                                                                                           Personality Traits:  I am self assured and I uaually succeed I never give up even if it means beating a olog single handed. I will use my abilities to my advantage. For example to kill an olog I will use my intelligence to confuse the olog to beat himself up. This is  just an example, As I said I do not like to settle things with violence. I am also an extroverted person. I like to talk to people especially other pure dwarves.

Ambitions: I hope to make everything pure and nobody or nothing to be impure or imperfect. As I said I do not like anything impure or imperfect.  

Strengths/Talents: I am good at persuading people and confusing them so I can trick them into letting me pass.

Weaknesses/Inabilities: I am terrible at combat and stealth. I can not beat an very smart dwarf. I most likely will run in the fight. 

Appearance (List the extra details of your characters appearance, IE; height & weight): I am 3 feet 11 inches tall . I weigh 90 pounds or 40.8233 kilograms. im skinny. I always wear robes. I have green eyes.

Appearance, please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin (If you need help, see our screenshot guide here):   If this does not work go to http://i.imgur.com/DjI6Vfd.png

[AfricanGlasses 111]

Under Review

PENDING:

 

I've placed your application on pending. This means that you have 24 hours (from my comment) to make the following changes. If for whatever reason you need more time please feel free to PM me via forums!

 

Changes:

1. Your biography needs to include at least one piece of lore. Instead of utilizing the biography to depict who you ate and self constructed opinions of your own character, tell us a story. Let me know where he is from, what he likes, and dislikes... His experiences (to a minimum because you haven't roleplayed your character yet) and some general information about the places he is from. Please, remove the orc killed your parents clause within this portion. It is overused and a cliché. Your parents can die if you wish them to, however use a creative way!

2. Your powergaming definition is seemingly correct, but just know that powergaming isn't all about fighting and that it can be through all types of roleplay!

 

If you need help editing these two portions of your application, feel free to reach me on discord @ jackmmills#0582 OR through my forum account. I'm more than happy to help you!

 

Have a great day.

[AfricanGlasses 111]

After 24 hours and communication between both myself and the applicant, I do not believe that the biography is sufficient enough for proper acceptance onto the server.

 

Your biography is not lacking lore, it is simply incorrect at times. For instance, There is no nation known as Alban (rather a religious capital for the nation of haense. Your biography also alludes to 'pvp' instead of combat and gives irrational thoughts that aren't exactly conventional for the server.

 

Also, when did High Elves and Ologs invade? I do not ever recall that happening nor reading it on ANY wiki page.

 

Please go ahead and take a few hours to actually look over the wiki page and write out your biography in a factual and flowing manner. If you need any help just give me a buzz via forum pm.

 

Thank you! have a great day.

[AfricanGlasses 111]

This application has been denied.

 

Moved to the Denied Applications forum.