Trogdorian 0 Share Posted January 16, 2018 Out-Of-Character Information Please do your best to correct spelling and grammatical errors, this is an RP server and writing is the main form of communication! What’s your Minecraft account name?: Trogdorian What timezone are you in?: Central How old are you?: 15 Are you aware the content and interactions on this server may not be appropriate for children under the age of 13? (You must be at least 13 to apply): yes Have you read and agreed to the rules?: yes What’s the rule you agree with the most?: The common sense one ( The first one, I believe ) Are there any rule(s) that confuse you or don’t make sense? (if so we can help clear it up!): Nay How did you find out about Lord of the Craft?: Friends told me about it Link(s) to past Whitelist Applications (If applicable): N/A Have you logged into the server yet? (You cannot be whitelisted without logging in at least once): Yeah Definitions Feel free to Google the answers or use our wiki definitions as a reference, but make sure that you write the write them in your own words, not those of another website or person! Plagiarizing will result in the automatic denial of your application! What is Roleplaying?: Roleplaying is putting yourself inside of another person's shoes and thinking and acting like them What is Metagaming?: When you use info that your character in-roleplay wouldn't know- it's bad What is Power-emoting (Powergaming)?: When you emote something that another person can't react to- also bad In-Character InformationNow you actually make your character - be creative but stay reasonable! Make sure they make sense and that they follow lore. Try to come up with a character that you actually want to play. Character’s name: (what do you want your character to be called?) Fomni Character’s sex: (male or female?) Male Character’s race: (you can find all the playable races here.) Human Character’s age: (upon application, your character must be 18 or older, and depending on the race, they can be over five hundred years old!) 23 Biography (This is one of the most important sections of the application. Please take your time and make it a decent paragraph long. Read up on your character's race and be sure to add at least one accurate reference from the server lore): (where does your character come from?; where have they traveled to?; what year were they born in? et cetera.) Fomni grew up in Marna. His father was a high-ranking military official, and this brought unwanted issues into Fomni's life. Growing up with this was problematic, and it's lead to an issue with authority. He's a violent boy with a fragile temper. He just recently left the arms of his parents, and has been unleashed upon the world. Personality Traits: (what are your character's quirks?; habits?; likes and dislikes?) Fomni has problems with authority, but also succumbs to it quickly. He's a cleanly boy, and he hates dirty liars. He's goofy, and known for messing around, but he knows when to be serious Ambitions: (what does your character aspire to be?) To not be alone Strengths/Talents: (what is your character really, really good at?) Creating, convincing Weaknesses/Inabilities: (what is a skill that your character needs to work on?) Honesty, anger issues Appearance: (what does your character look like?; how tall are they?; hair color?; scars?) Pretty tall. Like 6'2", blonde hair, blue eyes, no scars Skin: (please provide us a screenshot of your character’s skin; if you need help, see our screenshot guide here.)https://i.imgur.com/KgWmTM6.jpg Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
E__V__O 2000 Share Posted January 16, 2018 Under Review Alright, i'll first start with the biography, although you have put pieces of server lore / history in it, i'll like for the biography to be expanded to show me more of your character. Secondary, your skin. Your skin has no pupils. Just. Dark. Eyes. Fix this please. You have 24 hours, contact me if you've completed it early with the changes. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
E__V__O 2000 Share Posted January 17, 2018 This application has been denied. Moved to the Denied Applications forum. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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