My application

[modaron 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:dannymine

-How old are you?:14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: England, West sussex

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I have just started my GCSE's and in my spare time i play PC and Xbox

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:10-20 hours

-How long have you played minecraft?:9 months

-What do you know about roleplaying?:I know that roleplaying is all about growing your character

-What do you expect this server will be like?:Fun and exciting

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I have my own server with my freinds but i shut it down because some guy burnt down everyone's houses

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes I have

-Name the 4 races on this server:Elf, Human, Dwarf and orc

-How did you hear about us?:From the yogscast

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Modaron

In-Character:

-Character Name: Modaron

-What is your Race?:Elf

-Biography:When I was young elf of thrity two my home was attacked by group of wandering bandits they killed my father and took my mother and sister and left me for the wolves. I tried to follow the bandits but they had vanished. I was alone and hungry. Just as I was about to give up I found a group of wandering elves. They took me under there wing had trained in the arts of swordfighting and archery.When I was ready I set out to find the bandits after many weeks of travlling i found there encampment. I slaughtered every one of them even the women. But alas my Mother and Sister were not there. I had given up hope of ever seeing them again but when a passed some travlers they told me they had seen two female elves heading towards a mystical temple called the cloud temple of Aegis. I set forth straight away. I soon arrived at the cloud temple and this is where my story cacthes up to me. Some day I will find my mother and sister and then i will be at peace

-Character Age:125

-Character Appearance:See screenshot

-Character Personality: Will do anything to protect those around him and has a fear of wolves

-Your ambitions:To find my mother and sister

-Can your character read or write?: Yes

-Can your character mine?: no

-Are you a capable builder?:only small buildings

-Can you wield a sword?:Yes and has a good aim with the bow

-Enjoy Farming?:No

-Does your character have any special skills?:No that he knows of

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information:

[NairOG 1]

We require you to explain what you know role-play is.

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-You didn't include a skin link.

-Your application was too short.

-Contains elements of meta-gaming.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been.

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