DeadCthulhu 4 Share Posted September 22, 2011 By the will of The Creator Aegis had formed in an instant. As the magma cooled and the seas stopped boiling primitive life began to emerge. undetectable by mortal eyes these creatures huddled around volcanic vents. There they thrived, multiplied, and adapted to this strange new world. New species were born and migrated into the cold vast darkness of the sea. Of these new creations the Krakeshut were the most advanced predators. Similar to the Squid except much more aggressive, and highly intelligent. This peculiar species with 8 sucker covered tentacles, two large eyes, and a powerful beak ruled the seas wiping out entire species with their insatiable appetites. The Creator took pity on the other creatures of the sea and ordered the Aenguls to put an end to the great race of Krakeshut. They were hunted ruthlessly by the immortals, but Iblees respected the noble lords of the sea and begged The Creator to spare just one Krakeshut. The Creator granted the request, but this was not enough for Iblees. In an act of defiance Iblees fed the creature of his flesh granting it eternal life. Many Millenia passed and the last Krakeshut grew to gargantuan size. The insatiable hunger was now threatening all life in the ocean and any sailing vessel that crossed it's path was dragged down into the murky depths. The Creator placed a curse upon Krakeshut causing her to fall into a deep slumber. Iblees was outraged by the loss of his favored pet, and recorded the ritual that would awaken the slumbering behemoth onto tablets of bedrock. The tablets were taken to an island temple of Iblees. To prevent the awakening of the beast the Creator sunk the entire island killing all of it's inhabitants except for one Temple guardian who managed to escape. He passed down the knowledge of the stone tablets and the Order of the Deep One was established to seek out the sunken city, and revive the last remaining Krakeshut. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sultan 3953 Share Posted September 22, 2011 God could not kill the beast thats not right as God could remove anything even Ibless is nothing compared to god.. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
moondoggy 27 Share Posted September 22, 2011 You know how they can make zombies into giant zombies? Imagine them turning a squid into a giant squid:p I like that you are persistent! I would recommend a few more changes in your lore one being change "God" to "Creator". If you are really serious about building this city i would recommend either donating or getting a donator to build a protected underwater city in the new world. Those Oceans are insanely big! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeadCthulhu 4 Author Share Posted September 23, 2011 Modified. I changed the part about him being "unable" to kill it. Though if The Creator could kill Iblees then why didn't he? If something is truly immortal then it simply cannot be killed. I plan on donating as soon as I'm able. having some money troubles at the moment, but hopefully they will be worked out soon. If I'm unable to I would greatly appreciate a donor helping me build a protected city at the bottom of the ocean in the new world. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
V0idsoldier 1139 Share Posted September 23, 2011 I am confused, in all of your past posts you explained this thing was not going to be a god, or even close to one, yet you make it immortal? You make it Iblees's pet? Come on man, there is nothing wrong with worshiping a huge squid ((Ok there is but it is still cool)) but you make it capable of standing up to the Creater? Seems a bit much considering in your past posts you made it clear you weren't going to make it this powerful. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sultan 3953 Share Posted September 23, 2011 Modified. I changed the part about him being "unable" to kill it. Though if The Creator could kill Iblees then why didn't he? If something is truly immortal then it simply cannot be killed. I plan on donating as soon as I'm able. having some money troubles at the moment, but hopefully they will be worked out soon. If I'm unable to I would greatly appreciate a donor helping me build a protected city at the bottom of the ocean in the new world. Little did Iblees know that this was all part of the Great God's plan to test the descendants of Man and Woman. quote from the Lore that why.. any way Ya God can undo anything so its not smart to make the thing your doing strong that God cant kill it.. that why his god You could say God Keept one of them and gave it Immortality Only to die by being killed (Not old age, or Disease) God Had a Plan for it maybe? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alex_Pan 112 Share Posted September 23, 2011 Read the ancient lore, Iblees is like a mole on God's face which he doesn't feel like getting rid of. This Kraken would be like... A hair. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
V0idsoldier 1139 Share Posted September 23, 2011 Ok, I am not talking about god, I am talking about all of us. This thing is like a god, sure you have the god of gods, and then you have iblees, but this thing is right under iblees. I am not concerned for god's well being, I am concerned that this thing is epically overpowered. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sultan 3953 Share Posted September 23, 2011 Ok, I am not talking about god, I am talking about all of us. This thing is like a god, sure you have the god of gods, and then you have iblees, but this thing is right under iblees. I am not concerned for god's well being, I am concerned that this thing is epically overpowered. There is only one God.. Ibless is a Deamons Deamons are Gods Servants and worshipers like Angeuls Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Percival 10 Share Posted September 23, 2011 Not sure bout this idea... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeadCthulhu 4 Author Share Posted September 23, 2011 Ok it's changed The creator didn't try to kill it just made it go to sleep. This creature is not a god just a beast with eternal life. (Like Indiana Jones after drinking from the Holy Grail) It could die if it were killed but it will not die of old age ever. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
V0idsoldier 1139 Share Posted September 23, 2011 Ok it's changed The creator didn't try to kill it just made it go to sleep. This creature is not a god just a beast with eternal life. (Like Indiana Jones after drinking from the Holy Grail) It could die if it were killed but it will not die of old age ever. +1 awesome now bro, much better! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeadCthulhu 4 Author Share Posted September 23, 2011 Now how about that approved Villain Application so I can get things rolling? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tegrof 46 Share Posted September 23, 2011 Now this is good and pretty unique lore. I think the vampires should remake their lore aswell, just like this guy did. *Hat off* +1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Respiren 524 Share Posted September 23, 2011 God could not kill the beast thats not right as God could remove anything even Ibless is nothing compared to god.. And yet Iblees persists, a paradox yes ^.^ Perhaps God could remove the squid, but does not care to do so. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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