[Accepted]jackmonkey76

[jackbren 25]

[Out-Of-Character:jack

-Minecraft Account Name:jackmonkey76

-How old are you?:15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: canada

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:well im the type of person who will spend hours on a game and lucky for me this server seems like it up 24/7 no lag awsome and its rp woop.And i have alot of friends who play minecraft and once i see if this server is as awsome as it looks ill tell them about it which will probablly hapen soon.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:15 hours a week or more

-How long have you played minecraft?:since 1.4

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:well ive played alot of role playine games like dungeon hunter alliance and other games like that and iv'e done a little minecraft rp on a diffrent server before it's like playing a character in your own story hence role playing and all the stories of every member will come together to create one big story you can choose to be good or bad to protect or to kill its your choice and your choice could cahnge the hole server.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:[truly i think its gonna be a great experence -What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them:vadmans server well that server was full of no good griefers

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:[Yes, I agree with the rules 100% and I promise to obay them

-Name the 4 races on this server. Humans, Dwarfs, Elfes and Orcs. There are also Undead and Ascended but I dont know if there races

-How did you hear about us?:[yogscast.]

-What was your favourite Law?:[no griefing.]

-What was your least favourite Law?:[they all made sense to me.]

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?[jackbren]

In-Character:Knight jack

-Character Name:[Knight jack]

-What is your Race?:[Human]

-Biography:[i woke up one morning two a brisk fall day I hoped out of bed and walked over two the window and opend it as wide as I could feeling the breeze run over my body then I opened my eyes to the beautiful view of oren the busy markets the great castle it was amazing. Ever morning I rushed to the window to see this amazing view. After a couple minutes stareing out the window I got dressed made myself some breakfast and ran out the door. On my way through the market place I noticed some dark hooded figures that just seemed to be standing there. When I got to my fathers market stall he was talkeing to a man in a red robe it looked like there were arguing fineally my father saw me standing behind him he instantlly sent the man away.My father asked me if I had a good morning.I said yes I did lovely morning insn't it .Why yes it is son it should be a lovely day now go on and grab me my coat from home I forgot it this morning.I said why yes father. As a ran home I noticed the men in the dark robes were still there standing there staring at the ground havent even moved a inche I ignored them and ran home when I got there I went inside and grabbed my fathers coat from the rack.As I was leaving I heard screams and suddenly a fog filled the city.I ran back to my fathers market stall as fast as I could. There were people screaming all around me but I could not see them then finally up a head I saw a cloaked man one of the men that where just standing there but suddenly they where running around. As I came closer I saw a large object that the hooded man was holdeing and as I came closer I saw that the object was a man it was my father.....

rushed over to him he was staring up at the man in fear pleading to him as I got close my father noticed me comeing up behind and he creamed SON!! GET OUT OF HERE!!! RUN!!! .In fear I stoped the hooded fiqure turned around at me I was petrifed there I new I should of run but I was to scared. Then slowly the hooded man turned to face my father. Sudenly a purple portal opened next to them. The hooded man slowly turned back to me and started walking towards the portal dragging my father behind him at that moment I finally relized what was happening and ran towards my father. I got there just in time. The hooded man was half way through my fathers back touching the portal I grabbed my dads leg. SON LEAVE ME RUN RUN!!!!!!.at that moment he kicked me back and he was pulled throug the portal.At that moment I got up and jumped towards the portal as I was less than an inche from it closed. I fell to the ground in despair. I wasn't just feeling sad I was in rage I swore I would look for my father and defeat the undead and ever since then ive been searching around Aegis for my father and the undead who took him.

-Character Age:[28]

-Character Appearance:[A handsome knight why looks as strong as a bear

-Character Personality:[trustworthy and kind unless in battle.]

-Your ambitions:[to vanquish all threats to humanity

-Can your character read or write?:[yes]

-Can your character mine?:[Yes]

-Are you a capable builder?[Yes]

-Can you wield a sword?:[yes ever since that day jack has trained with a sword

-Enjoy Farming?:[no]

-Does your character have any special skills?:[is a good swordsman and a good hunter.] screenshot of your skin:http://minecraftskinspro.com/default.asp?action=readreviews&link=6997

[Aeolwyn The Elf 139]

We are NOT looking for pvp happy players to join the server.

Your bio must include more than 1 event. I recommend adding your characters past into it, as well as hopeful future.

You need to tell me exactly WHAT roleplaying is, not just what you have done.

Once you have EDITED (Do NOT create a new post) your app, pm me and I will have another look.

[Aeolwyn The Elf 139]

While your bio is long, it does not tell very much about your characters past. All it states is that your parents where killed by orcs, and that you will do whatever you can to slay them all.

You did NOT tell me exactly what roleplaying is.

Once you have EDITED (Do NOT create a new post) your app, pm me and I will have another look.

[Aeolwyn The Elf 139]

Poor Grammar/punctuation

You did not tell me exactly WHAT roleplaying is.

Your bio does not make very much sense.

Once you have EDITED ( Do NOT create a new post ) your app, pm me and I will have another look.

[jackbren 25]

hey

[Aeolwyn The Elf 139]

Poor Grammar/punctuation

[Aeolwyn The Elf 139]