adamc2000 1167 Share Posted December 15, 2019 [ just bored and made a poem bout ants thought share it with you all, also to all those still fighting in this war which still has no name i think? remember to just have fun and try not to take everything ooc! anyways her it is!] Ants endless wars I swear my allegiance And sharpen my jaw I beg farewell For I might not see the morn’ And should I see the morn’ I will not come back the same For the field is covered In lines of my dead comrade For we came in defense Of my home, my friends, my queen Against the army i’m facing Straight across from me And here we shall stand And here I shall die Upon this stone road I will Lie For I love My Colony More then my life And it was he who killed me This I know But my fellow brothers of war shall avenge me Of this i’m sure For no Ant leaves Until each is avenged For each of our brothers that die We shall take ten more And so upon this endless war I lie Until my young generation comes To take me away To the great graveyard I go Like my ancestors have And be Visited and honored By those after me But in this endless war we shall survive For I don’t die in vain For in anguish my sons cry ”For you I to shall die!” And so they will go to my queen And swear allegiance And join the great struggle For they to may suffer my fate For the endless wars await. Please tell me what you think and leave a like! advice is always welcome and I hope you all are having fun! 6 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TH3GHOSTWAFFL3 489 Share Posted December 15, 2019 Nice little poem here. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
adamc2000 1167 Author Share Posted December 15, 2019 6 hours ago, TH3GHOSTWAFFL3 said: Nice little poem here. Thanks! any advise for me? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
TH3GHOSTWAFFL3 489 Share Posted December 16, 2019 21 hours ago, adamc2000 said: Thanks! any advise for me? @adamc2000 most of my poems are in a very different form to this one, so I’m not really qualified to offer any proper feedback. Ultimately, poetry is from the heart, so free-form poems such as this one are very hard to give feedback on. I’d love to see you write more! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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