Server Application (Fixed Again)

[Aerolus 0]

Application

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:Kingme1800

-How old are you?:14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: -600 GMT / United States of America

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I have a very good grip on the English language, and I use grammar as often as possible.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I love to play Minecraft, and I also love to roleplay. I have searched for good roleplaying games over the years, but ended up comming back to Minecraft to find a good server.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I can play every day after school, at around 4:30 CST.

-How long have you played minecraft?: One year.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: Roleplaying is being somebody you are not, and doing what that person would do, and not what you would do. I have been roleplaying as long as I can remember.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I saw this server at the top 3 on the server lists, and I decided to check it out. Number 3 is the ImDeity server, and I have played on that for about a week, and I am expecting this one to be twice as good.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: ImDeity Kingdoms, because it had nothing new going on, when you got to a certain point you are stuck.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: I agree to the rules completely, because they keep you in order.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Elves, Orcs, Humans, and Dwarves, plus two sub-races, Undead and Ascended.

-How did you hear about us?: I saw the server name at the top of the top 10 server list on a random site.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Display name is Kingme1800, account name is Zdude73.

In-Character:

-Character Name: Aerolus

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Kingme1800

-Biography: Aerolus, a young elf who goes by Aero, has grown up in the treetops. His father was a guard who wields a bow, and Aero longs to be just like him. This all changes when Aero's father sends him to the academy in Oren. Aero spends two years in the academe when he gets a letter from the Guard from home. Reading this letter, Aero learns that his mother and father were killed in a wildfire that destroyed their whole village. After Aero reads this, he runs away, and ends up in Malinor.

-Character Age: 17

-Character Appearance: Tall, grey eyes, red hair, and skinny.

-Character Personality: Nice, does not like to make people angry, and I try to avoid fights. If I happen to get in one, I will stay back and wait for a good time to strike.

-Your ambitions: I want to be an Archer.

-Can your character read or write?: Very well.

-Can your character mine?: Yes, but I prefer to stay above ground.

-Are you a capable builder? I can build near anything.

-Can you wield a sword?: I can wield a sword, and kill everything that the sword will cut.

-Enjoy Farming?: No. I am impatient when it comes to farming.

-Does your character have any special skills?: I have extraordinary balance, and can jump higher then most people.]

-A screenshot of your skin:http://minecraftskinspro.com/default.asp?action=readreviews&link=11232

-Other Information: I would like to be in this server, because I would like to be part of all the great things I have heard about it.

[TeaLulu 1783]

Denied.

For any of the following issues:

1) Your biography is: incoherent, not formatted properly, not long enough, not detailed, only focuses on 1 event rather than your life as a whole, exhibits qualities of powergaming, needs to talk about your past and probable future, or needs to be expanded, or did not fit lore.

2) You did not answer the "What do you know about roleplaying?" question in a satisfactory manner. (Hint: Tell us WHAT roleplaying is, in your own words.)

3) Your skin picture is not a screenshot of your skin in use, not provided, the link is broken, or not appropriate for this server.

4) You failed to fill out the application in it's entirety.

5) You did not use the proper application format.

6) You posted more than 1 application in a 3 day period of time.

7) You bumped your post.

8) Your application is plagiarized or too similar to another application I have seen.

Please keep in mind the following:

1) This server is a ROLEPLAY server, we expect any applicants to know WHAT exactly that means and any relevant terms.

2) This server is NOT for everyone. We can afford to be choosey with who we allow to play on it. It is NOT our obligation to accept you; Rather, it is our obligation to maintain a fun and safe environment for all of our current users and any future users.

3) Our server, our rules. If we say you need a Villain Application to play your character, then you NEED a Villain Application.

4) Re-posting your application within 3 days is grounds for it to be denied.

5) You MUST adhere to the Lore; You can and SHOULD read your race's relevant Roleplay forum to get a better idea of what it is like to roleplay that race.

6) You can and SHOULD read the Tutorials and Guides forum.

[Aerolus 0]

Could you tell me which of these it is so I may improve it?

For example:

First Reason: My biography fits in with the Lore, it tells about my whole life, and explains some future events, and I have edited it 9 or 10 times to make sure it is formatted correctly.

Second Reason: I answered what I believe roleplaying is.

Third Reason: The skin I use is from the LotC Downloads section, so I am sure that it is good for the server.

Fourth Reason: I filled out the entire application.

Fifth Reason: I am sure I used the proper format.

Sixth Reason: I posted it more then once before I found the 'Edit' button.

Seventh Reason: I did not bump my application.

Eighth Reason: My application is completely original.