Third application of recklez.

[Recklez 45]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

Recklez

-How old are you?:

16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

Netherlands

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

A little bit. But english isnt mine main language

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

an fun guy to be around with.

Love rping and still on school.

I get very upset if somebody blames me on something i dindt do.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

10/20 hours per week

-How long have you played minecraft?:

3 years

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:

I played roleplaying about 5 years now.

i do all sorts of rping when i was little i played outside and we pretended to be knights.

and i rpd in minecraft for a year.

Roleplaying is picking a role. and play it.

as example.

i am going to play a dwarf blacksmith. thats mine role.

now i "play" it.

i talk like a dwarf. and act like a blacksmith. tough and cool.

and u have to adept to the stories around you. (wich is the hardest part)

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

Very cool and a serious rp server.

(so no random fights -.-)

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

Mostly faction war rp servers. and i left them because of the annoying random fights and raids.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:

Yes i agree with all the rules.

And i read the lore too.

-Name the 4 races on this server.

Human, Dwarf, Elf, Orc

-How did you hear about us?:

Google.

-Did you vote?:

Yes

-What was your favourite Law?:

No griefing

-What was your least favourite Law?:

I dont really have 1

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?

Recklez

In-Character:

-Character Name: Murgaw Bloodshredder

-What is your Race?: Orc

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:

Recklez.

-Biography:

When i was a young boy. i worked in the blacksmith with mine dad.

making weapons and armors for the army.

Because all the orcs where fighting against the evil armys of Iblees.

but one day, the armys told us to move to the main capital of the orcs.

because the town where we lived in was going to be attacked!

so we travelled back to the Nation of Kragrum.

when we arrived in the city it was under attack by skeletons and zombies.

they gave me and mine dad a sword and told us "Go! Now! and protect ye fellow orcz!!

me and mine dad replyed "Ug!".

after a couple of hours we defeated the skeletons and zombies.

but i couldnt find mine dad anywhere. he was probably slaughterd and converted in one of Iblees's minions.

After that event i travelled to the dwarven kingdoms.

To master the art of blacksmithing.

when i was done i travelled alot.

i dindt know where to go. or what to do..

i was all alone. no mother, no father.

so i went to a nearby little village.

nobody was armed there so i thougt : Well I am a blacksmith, Why shouldnt I stay here for a while?

after a couples of years I was Fully skilled in blacksmithing and leaved the town again.

Now the adventure of Murgaw Bloodshredder began.

As he wondered off in the great lands of Aegis!

-Character Age:

37

-Character Appearance:

Big and muscled.

with black hair and no shirt only pants.

-Character Personality:

Clumsy. Sensitive.

-Your ambitions:

Blacksmithing and farming.

-Can your character read or write?:

No I never learned that I can only read a little.

-Can your character mine?:

No I aint that good with swinging pickaxes.

-Are you a capable builder?

Ofcourse I can build some houses (but I cant design them so they would be empty and ugly )

-Can you wield a sword?: '

Yes! i am a true fighter!

-Enjoy Farming?:

Yes! one of mine greatest passions!

-Does your character have any special skills?:]

Berserking. When I almost die. I gain immense strengt and speed.

I have no unusually magic powers or something .

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information:

Nothing really

[Recklez 45]

1 bump per 2 days. soo. Bump.

[Recklez 45]

Edited the biography to make it better and smoother.

Chanced name from Murgwak into Murgaw (finded it more suitable.)

Left the biography with an open ending. (so if i join the server i have the oppertunity to blend into a story and make new lore of myself)

[Whitebeard 126]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/

[Recklez 45]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/

1, The biography did linked to the lore of aegis.

2, i did put efford in it.

3, i have a realy bad form of dyslexia and i dont think its right to judge me on that.

can u relook mine application knowing that i have dysexia :/>

cuz this was a pretty good aplication and i putted much efford in it....

[Whitebeard 126]

Nope, Rejected.

[Recklez 45]

Nope, Rejected.

Awww.

[Petyr 485]

Your biography doesnt conflict with lore, but you didnt include any names of actual places/people/events. Also, having your parents die is really cliche on this server. It's just not very original. If you added more detail to the bio, appearance, and personality, you should be good.

In case you have more questions: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/13144-petyrs-guide-to-accepted-server-applications/page__pid__80210#entry80210

[Baisha 8]

1, The biography did linked to the lore of aegis.

2, i did put efford in it.

3, i have a realy bad form of dyslexia and i dont think its right to judge me on that.

can u relook mine application knowing that i have dysexia :/>

cuz this was a pretty good aplication and i putted much efford in it....

Read the header of his post; it is a list of common reasons that people are denied, and he underlined the ones that specifically applied to your application. Furthermore, insulting a GM wont really help your case, just FYI.

As far as format goes, you tend to hit the Enter/return button frequently, quite often in the middle of a sentence, which makes it awkward to read. Just stick to full paragraphs, unless you are using dialogue in your biography, which in that case it is proper to start on a new line.

[Recklez 45]

i did al of that in mine new improved application.

its tottaly different and i am very proud of it!

please lock this 1 im ashamed on of my actions!

mine dad does die in mine other app. but its a whole story around it.

and he isnt killed by undeads or thiefs :D

[Baisha 8]

Just a heads up, your formatting is still awkward, and you should probably remove that quip at brett, especially as he never said anything about you not linking to lore.

Look at the sample application that is stickied to get an idea of what they are looking for.

[Recklez 45]

Just a heads up, your formatting is still awkward, and you should probably remove that quip at brett, especially as he never said anything about you not linking to lore.

Look at the sample application that is stickied to get an idea of what they are looking for.

how do you mean formatting i dont really know what that is... please explain :)?

[Baisha 8]

Basically the layout. Like I had pointed out earlier, you often hit the Enter button and cut off lines mid-sentence. For example:

[but i couldnt find mine dad anywhere. he was probably slaughterd and converted in one of Iblees's minions.

After that event i travelled to the dwarven kingdoms.

To master the art of blacksmithing.

when i was done i travelled alot.

i dindt know where to go. or what to do..

i was all alone. no mother, no father.

so i went to a nearby little village.

nobody was armed there so i thougt : Well I am a blacksmith, Why shouldnt I stay here for a while?

after a couples of years I was Fully skilled in blacksmithing and leaved the town again.

Now the adventure of Murgaw Bloodshredder began.

As he wondered off in the great lands of Aegis!]

should be something like this:

[-Biography:

I couldn't find my dad anywhere, perhaps he was slain in battle and converted in one of Iblees's minions? Following the battle, I traveled to the Dwarven Kingdom in order to train as a blacksmith. After months of grueling training, I began to develop a solid grasp on what it meant to be a blacksmith. Following the completion of my training, I didn't know where to go or what to do, so I decided to travel. I was all alone with no mother, nor father, so I went to a nearby village. Nobody was armed there, so I thought to myself: "Well I am a blacksmith, why shouldn't I stay here for a while?" After a couple of years, I was full-fledged Blacksmith and decided there was nothing left for me here, so I decided to leave the town.

Now the adventure of Murgaw Bloodshredder begins! ]

Notice the difference?

[Recklez 45]

Basically the layout. Like I had pointed out earlier, you often hit the Enter button and cut off lines mid-sentence. For example:

[but i couldnt find mine dad anywhere. he was probably slaughterd and converted in one of Iblees's minions.

After that event i travelled to the dwarven kingdoms.

To master the art of blacksmithing.

when i was done i travelled alot.

i dindt know where to go. or what to do..

i was all alone. no mother, no father.

so i went to a nearby little village.

nobody was armed there so i thougt : Well I am a blacksmith, Why shouldnt I stay here for a while?

after a couples of years I was Fully skilled in blacksmithing and leaved the town again.

Now the adventure of Murgaw Bloodshredder began.

As he wondered off in the great lands of Aegis!]

should be something like this:

[-Biography:

I couldn't find my dad anywhere, perhaps he was slain in battle and converted in one of Iblees's minions? Following the battle, I traveled to the Dwarven Kingdom in order to train as a blacksmith. After months of grueling training, I began to develop a solid grasp on what it meant to be a blacksmith. Following the completion of my training, I didn't know where to go or what to do, so I decided to travel. I was all alone with no mother, nor father, so I went to a nearby village. Nobody was armed there, so I thought to myself: "Well I am a blacksmith, why shouldn't I stay here for a while?" After a couple of years, I was full-fledged Blacksmith and decided there was nothing left for me here, so I decided to leave the town.

Now the adventure of Murgaw Bloodshredder begins! ]

Notice the difference?

well i made an entirely new app actually :3 maybe you can check that 1 out

[Lawrence Berell 226]

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