Excludeds Admission Submission

[Excluded 3]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:ExcludedGamer

-How old are you?:15

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:(UTC-08:00) Pacific Time (US & Canada)

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Extremely, I am from England but I have kept my flawless English alive.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: In short, I'm able to spell reasonably well, I've played video games about all my life, and I've especially loved roleplaying games/servers. I have alot of schoolwork to do, but when I don't get schoolwork, so there isn't to much fom me to do, that's why I decided to apply for this server.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: If the server's fun, I try to stay on as much as possible, which would be about 4 hours a day,Except on Tuesdays and some thursdays (band practice)and football games (friday).

-How long have you played minecraft?: I've been playing minecraft since a little while earlier than the Halloween update, so I'd say about a year?

-What do you know about roleplaying?: Roleplaying is a complex 'make-pretend' in which people take on the role of characters and act out those roles as the character would, to develope that character in a way that a character would within a fictional book. In a nutshell, it's an interactive story. Lots of fun.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: This server, what I it expect to be like, from what I've seen will most likely be an interactive environment involving heavy character developement through the use of words to create an enriched world in which players can immerse themselves in.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I've played on many servers before, mostly roleplaying servers, however, I usually left them because they didn't meet up to my high standards, they were more 'power-ups and upgrades' than character development.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: I have read, understood, and agreed to the rules, should there be any more rules added, I would be sure to check what they are, and what their purpose would be.

-Name the 4 races on this server: The four races on this server are Humans, Dwarves, Elves, and Orcs.

-How did you hear about us?: I first saw the video on the Yogscast, however I thought Lord of the Craft was just a map, until I found the post in MinecraftForums.net, I had to check it out then.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:ExcludedGamer

In-Character:

-Character Name: Frost Everbloom

-What is your Race?: Wood Elf

-Biography:Off the coast of Aegis a few brothers and me were gathering food for our parents. We heard footsteps around us we were surrounded by human bandits. They attacked us and held us down we tried to fight be we were to young and small. We were all knocked out and brought to some camp. When we awoke we heard a bandit come in he almost attacked my brother. A man stood and told him to attack him instead. The bandit agreed and soon enough the man tought us how to fight using swords and picks. A few years and we were in the mine. The man gave us the signal and we attacked. We ran out of the bandit camp into the woods. We didnt see the man but all of our brothers were safe. Soon we saw a young elf women and she helped us all of us at age 18 together we moved out. This is where the story begins.

-Character Age:18

-Character Appearance:He has dark brown hair,blue eyes, dark tan skin and can usally be seen with leather armor on.

-Character Personality:Frost is very cold blooded when it comes to combat, But when it is socially related He is tender and sweet and cares deeply for his team/brothers.

-Your ambitions: Aaron is a generally selfless person, and will often give to those in need without a word. He's content on keeping himself alive, and helping others to survive aswell.

-Can your character read or write?: Originally, I had no knowledge of how to read or write, however, he taught himself to read, and eventually write, by reading the many variations of books he finds over the years.

-Can your character mine?: I can mine, he's seen dwarves mine before. He just doesn't have much of a reason to mine.

-Are you a capable builder?:I can build redstone tech beyond your imagination and he can build extremely well.

-Can you wield a sword?: When Frost wields a sword, he's so fluid with the movements of the whipping blade that it's as if he's part of the sword. So yes.

-Enjoy Farming?: Frost doesn't like farming.

-Does your character have any special skills?: He is invaluable when it comes to his swordsman and marksman skills, however, he will only use it to benefit his or other's chances of survival.

-A screenshot of your skin:http://i.imgur.com/iNjEP.png

-Other Information: I'm hoping I can be accepted as soon as possible,Also me and my brothers will have the same bio and the same last name.

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography and also indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detain into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore. Then once you finish reworking repost, if you are looking for inspiration look at some other apps.