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[-Doggydigger- 1]

Out-Of-Character:Reed Rollings

-Minecraft Account Name:Doggydigger

-How old are you?:14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:eastern USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:For the most part I mispell things some times. Well a lot but its somewhat readable. Its my weakes area I have to say

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:I like mincraft. I want to be a doctor. I also like to hang around people.Im in 8th grade but i take a few highschool classes. I've already taken my AcT if your not American its a test that helps you rank yourself for collage.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:10+ have been as a wandering soul so pry more when im a member.

-How long have you played minecraft?:about 6 mon

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-What do you know about role playing? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:I know a little I like to practice as a soul.Like 2mon. Just villagers and old days stuff.Role playing is when you take on a character and try to be them at your best ability. In minecraft its funnier because you can look and basically make that character from whatever you want not what a script or something/someone says.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:Well I've seen a lot of it but probably fun and entertaining.From what I've seen as a soul its a very nice sever and I can't wait to join but I'll keep upgrading my application if I can think of more stuff but I'll wait for you distion.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:Yogcast got bored.Also a lot of little severs.Oh and lostcraft.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes and I love the lore.

-Name the 4 races on this server. orc ,elf ,human ,and dwarf

-How did you hear about us?:youtube from a guy named candle.

-Did you vote?:Yup like 20 times.

-What was your favorite Law?:No pvp in towns.Don't want to die while shopping

-What was your least favourite Law?:Ummmm..... war but thats not a law right?

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? doggydigger33

In-Character:Lorie

-Character Name:Lorie Smith

-What is your Race?:Elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: doggydigger33

-Biography:Lorie live in a small tribe of about 20. They were in a tribal war at the time with a bigger clan. One night while sleeping the larger clan attacked him and he was tooken from his village and all his relatives where killed. They Put a sack over his head. He over heard the guards who where taking him, betting how much they could sell him for. He was a strong and healthy elf, but he wasn't a servant he was a hunter. They took him to a far away cotail city where he was sold and put on a huge ship. He heard anoughter slave talking about where they where going it was a land of peace. He was very sad about his family and never getting to see them again. When he finally made it to the strange foreign land, he was shocked how happy he was even though he was a slave. A fair madam bought him. She planed on him being her servant. One night when the moon was bright he escaped. He ran off into the wilds and planed on living there after 20 or so years he returned hoping to have a good life in Laurilan.

-Character Age:21

-Character Appearance:Black hair brow eyes and green cloughts.

-Character Personality:Strong and silent.

-Your ambitions:To become a secsessful elf in the buetiful city of laurilan.

-Can your character read or write?:No he's a slave.

-Can your character mine?:Aye but I find it a wast of time and I don't like dark caves.

-Are you a capable builder? Well I can build a hut I've made a few good buildings.

-Can you wield a sword?:yes but prefers a bow.

-Enjoy Farming?:Yes very much so.

-Does your character have any special skills?:Knows how to survive in the wild. Also can cook like no other. Well maybe not Dawn...

-A screen shot of your skin:I didn't make it was the best elf skin I could find. http://skincache.com/skin?id=91506878

-Other Information:I like fishing its a fun past time(in character). :mrgreen:

[Sagwort 833]

Accepted

[-Doggydigger- 1]

THANKS A Lot i was about to edit my bio :)