My Own lil Application, 3rd Try....(ITS MY BIRTHDAY!)

[Cookie9000 13]

]-Minecraft Account Name:Cookie9000

-How old are you?:14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Canada/Pacific Time

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Im a bookworm, roleplays daily, and LOOOOVES MMO's.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 35-40 Hours.

-How long have you played Minecraft?: 2 Years.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:Roleplaying is getting in-depth with your character, like acting, but you make your own lines, and roleplay is doing things such as, when you get in a conflict, instead of whoever types faster like Elf: *SWINGS HIS SWORD AT TH-*" Orc:*swings his axe into his head*" instead, it involves a die, whoever rolls the dice, above 10 means he has the upper hand, and the person who doesnt roll the dice, the below 10 shows he has the upper hand.

-What do you expect this server will be like?To be an amazing, breathtaking roleplay server.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:Pigcraft. Reason: Corrupt admins. Survival SMP! Reason: Greifers.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:Yes.

-Name the 4 races on this server:Orc, Dwarf, Human, Elf.

-How did you hear about us?:Planet Minecraft

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:Cookie9000

-Character Name:Alanor_Swiftsteel

-What is your Race?:Human

-Biography:He lived was born at a secret cult chamber, deep underground, and was there until 3, when the hideout was found by a human warparty, and he was brought to a village. One night, the day before he turned 5, he felt a slight bulge in his head. A couple minutes later, when he was thinking about who ruled some of the vast kingdoms, he started feeling, something, evil, his eyes turned purple, and he started losing self-control, "The cultists!" he thought, than he knew what happened, when he was first born, they must've set a dark spirit, or something within him, something that wanted pure power, so whenever he thought of someone with grave power, or gaining it, that thing inside him would take ove- just before he could finish thinking, he blacked out, not knowing what happened after that. when he just woke up, he knew just a couple more minutes until the village guard would show up, so he quickly decided to not tell anyone about his dark secret. When he turned 5, the village guard started teaching to fend for himself when he moved out, when he turned age 15, he left the village, hoping to find a suitible place to live and never get his secret found, that was when he stepped foot onto Aegus...

-Character Age:17

-Character Appearance: Young looking, has a little scar on his arm, has brown eyes, and seems to have a face thats to young for him.

-Character Personality:He is curious,slightly shy type of person and seems to do have a hatred for cultists.

-Your ambitions:To help make peace, but the darkness in him has a diffrent plan...

-Can your character read or write?: to a decent amount.

-Can your character mine?:A little, yes.

-Are you a capable builder?:One of the villagers taught him when he was 13.

-Can you wield a sword?:Yes.

-Enjoy Farming?:Does not care.

-Does your character have any special skills?:Better than the averege man at swordsmenship

-Other Information: I cant wait to join this! Im also hoping to turn evil sometime in my rp..... Muhahahah.

[Trouvo 205]

other than what in my opinion is a poor application the message you sent me would also be a reason of why you would be denied, in my opinion of course

message from applicant

Sent Today, 09:06 AM

Hey, sorry if this is annoying, but hear me out! I've been waiting for a answer for my application for 6 days now, if you could hear out this message, please leave AT LEAST a answer on my application, thank you =D

http://www.lordofthe...my-application/

and my response to said message

Sent Today, 01:47 PM

first of all i am not a gm, i can not accept you, second sending a message to any gm to get them to read your app will be an immediate denial, and lastly you posted it this morning learn some patience some people had to wait over a week before they were accepted.and some have tried several times to make it in to the server, and the ones that have had made a really good application, you really need to work on your character and read how the server works as well, first you do not get to start out evil, work on your descriptions as well, the appearance of your character after already stating the character as 17 with the appearance being, Young looking, has a little scar on his arm, has brown eyes, and seems to have a face thats to young for him. is not very detailed, and somewhat repetitive.

You also really need to write a better biography....i mean really...at age 5 your character has such great understanding of the world that he even remembered blacking out, and noticing the guard, and that he is somehow inherently evil because of things that he remembers happening when he was 3? Not only is this a very poor attempt to become an "auto-villain" bypassing the way the server is setup, but also a very sad fantasy of a bio, what kind of reality is that?

And look up a proper definition of RP, on top of reading the rules for the server again.....die rolling is optional and is dependent upon both parties agreeing to die rolling, I for one as well as many others i know prefer not to use the die, because in our opinion it turns it into luck and devoids any learned skills and proper wielding of a sword.

heck, read the instructions on the application as well, when it says to write 2-3 sentences, do not just put bullets for your answer.

And last but not least my personal pet peeve, learn to spell!

[Whitebeard 126]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-read-first-chevaliers-guide-to-posting-a-good-application/