Lilymans submission

[lilyman 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: redscallion

-How old are you?:13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Time zone: Pacific. USA.

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: i am good at staying in character. i have a pretty good education. I don't play minecraft all the time, just most of it.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: maybe 1-2 hours a day.

-How long have you played minecraft?: Maybe 1 year or so? my friend introduced me to the game and iv'e been hooked ever since.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I was always good at staying in character for games like D&D, and as for role playing, it is when you create a character, become the character, and enter a world with many other people who are also in character. I cannot, and will not break my character in these types of games unless absolutely necessary, And even then i am hesitant. I get so warped up in the role of my character that sometimes i forget my rel name.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: A server that pulls me in and lets me be whoever i want to be.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:I've played quite a few servers, but they didn't seem as involving or as organized as this one.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:Yes, all of them. i agree with all of the rules, because they seem to make this a safe, fun server.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Orc, Elf, Human and Dwarf. Not including undead, and the other one, which i can't currently remember.

-How did you hear about us?: On the legendary craft website, when thy were talking about getting something that would make the server run faster.

-Did you vote?:Yes, but i don't understand the differance between vote one or vote two.

-What was your favourite Law?: The one about unlawful murder, and no griefing, which is a fairly common but usually goes unpunished

-What was your least favourite Law?: I don't really disagree with any of them.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? redscallion, but my display name is lilyman

In-Character:

-Character Name: Samith Red

-What is your Race?: Dwarf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:redscallion

-Biography: Samith Red, was like everyone else, born in Aegis, the temple of the clouds. His mother and father where killed by a wandering pack of orcs, simply because they wanted to. Samith was infuriated. he wanted to hunt down and kill all orcs, and the Rex coming first. As he wandered the wilds trying to survive, he stumbled upon a pack of orc traders coming from the forest kingdom. Samith wanted them all dead. he drew his sword he had fashioned from wood and stone, and charged. the leader of the troop, it seemed, was quite calm. this made Samith even madder. He attempted to cut off the orc's arm, but instead he found himself on the ground, confused. His sword lay beside him, broken in two. "Come, little one." the orc said in a kindly voice. Samith obliged. They headed to the big tent and the orc sat Samith down and gave him a bowl of mushroom stew. After tasting the mushroom stew, all of his anger seemed to melt away. "Come, i will show you something. By the way, my name is Grindal, named after the monster of Beowulf." "And mine is Samith, named for the great worrior of Kal'Urgan." "Very fitting. Now, why ever would you want to murder us in such cold blood?" Samith was shocked. he was used to orcs bieng angry and violent. this one was calm and a humorist. The closet thing an orc in his experiences thought was humores was squashing heads. He followed Grindal into a make shift smithery. "This, is the smithy." He said proudly. "and this, is yours." Grindal handed Samith a hammer. "Use it well." For months Samith Traveld with the troop. He practiced Smithing and swordsmanship, until he felt ready. he retuned to The dwrf kingdom of Kal'Urgan to begin his life outside the protection of the well-trained Grindal and his troop.

-Character Age: 23

-Character Appearance: orange hair, 4 foot 2, 89 ponds, brown eyes. likes to wear a hood. oddly beardless.

-Character Personality: Very hardy, but not arrogant or cocky. he knows his place. He will not start a fight, but he will fight in them.

-Your ambitions: To be a master black smith, and to find amazing treasure underground.

-Can your character read or write?: A little, but bieng a man of the earth, he dosent really need to much literature skills.

-Can your character mine?: Yes, he loves mining and building.

-Are you a capable builder? I like to think i am, but i havent really made too many great accomplishments yet. but as long as i have someone telling me what do to, i can accomplish any amount of repetitive work.

-Can you wield a sword?:Yes, but only if i have to.

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes, but he doesn't get on the surface much.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Mining, constuction work. and oddly enough, baking.

-A screenshot of your skin: I am very sorry, I do not know how to take a screen shot of my skin. i uploaded it from the Lord of the craft skin pack.

-Other Information: Has a strange affection for cake. (and a not so strange affection for gold and diamond.)

[Jadles 85]

This was a good try! However:

Your answers are too short in places.

Your Character Biography is too short.

There are errors in grammar and punctuation.

Look at some examples ((but don't copy from them)), re-read your application, take your time and try again.

Have a read of this also: Petyr's excellent guide - http://www.lordofthe...r-applications/

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

I encourage you too check out the following link if you are struggling to write an application.

http://www.lordofthe...od-application/