+Kazhins app+

[Kazhin 3]

Out-Of-Character: Mats Nordli

Minecraft Account Name:Kazhin

How old are you?: 15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Norway, eu

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar? Yes, i would say so my self, i got better language than manny others i know

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Im a 15 year old boy from Norway, i mostly play minecraft and guitar on my spare time when im not at school. Im a active player and will be online about atleast 2-4 houers a day and more in the weekends.

How much time could you be on the server weekly? about 2-4 hours a day and some more in the weekends

How long have you played minecraft?: ive been playing minecraft since early alpha.

What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind? I Have played Wow on Normal servers and rp servers, and i know what rolplaying is (to live inside/be to think and act the same way as your characther would.). I mean that RP is a fun way to play a game.

What do you expect this server will be like? it seems like a good server whit a good team of people behind it, my friend (urgeoholiker) says its an awesome server and that i had to join, i have walked around there whitout white list and its a pretty landscape whit nice city's

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them? Ive been playing on herocraft but left due to boring city's and boring people i have also played on a server named hellfire but left due to ignorant admins etc and i have played on different others but left due to little exitement in the game

]Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore? Yes i have read both the rules and lore

Name the 4 races on this server: Orc, human, dwarf, elf and undead

How did you hear about us? friends and minecraftforum.net

Did you vote? I havent voted yet but will vote after i have posted the app

What was your favourite Law?: That you must keep in character and not use anny 1337 speak, it makes the game much more living and fun to play!

What was your least favourite Law?: no of the laws were to realy dislike, they are all good laws setting a good standard for the server

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Kazhin

In-Character: Kazhin

Character Name:Kazhin

What is your Race?: Human

Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Kazhin

Biography: Kazhin is a human whos parents and family got killed in a orc attack. He is huge orc racist and will slay most orcs that cross his path, his wish is to become a great warrior.

Kazhin was a pretty normal man wich worked as a woodsman, he had a wife and two childrens. he lived happily until a day when he was in the woods.While Kazhin were in the woods the town he lived in were ambushed by orcs and everyone was killed, even his family was slaugthered.Blinded by rage and hatred he tried to track down the orcs who had killed his family, after a 2 days he finally found the orc raiders. After following the orcs for nearly a day the orcs found out that they wanted to set up a camp. At night Kazhin sneaked into the camp and killed one orc but right after he had killed the orc, he was spotted by another orc. Kazhin tried to flee but the orcs were to many and trapped him in a corner, and Kazhin was captured. The orcs beat up Kazhin so badly that he passed out, when he woke up he was in a cell somewhere in the orc kingdom of Krugmar.

Character Age: 24

Character Appearance: strong and straight body short hair and a red armour

Character Personality: Aggresive, slightly dumb, skilled in combat

Your ambitions:To become the greatest warrior in the land

Can your character read or write?: He can write and read but whit some difficulties

Can your character mine?: Yes my father was a miner and tought me to mine since i was 10 to i was 17 and he was taken by orcs

Are you a capable builder? Yes

Can you wield a sword?: Im highly trained in swords, i have slayed manny animals and humans and orcs etc on my way to get where i am today and the killing has made me stronger and more skilled

Enjoy Farming?: As much as most others, not to much but im willing to do so

Does your character have any special skills?: I sometimes go into a frenzy and slay mostly anny foes whit a quik spin of my blade hitting manny of the people in my way

skin link: http://i1099.photobucket.com/albums/g387/Matsost/2011-09-20_173517.png

[Jadles 85]

Your answers are too short.

Character biography is far too short.

There are some errors.

Make your application neater and easier to read.

Re-read your application, look at some examples ((but don't copy them)) Read Petyr's excellent guide (linked in this post) and try again.

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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