[Amendment] Corcitoră Transformation

[The King Of The Moon 7016]

Old:

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(The main body of this ability will remain unchanged)

 

Redline to be changed:

-Corcitori face contortion is fixed as one specific ‘face’ that MUST appear vampiric, hideous and inhuman, and cannot be used to change eye colour or hair colour, add or remove facial hair or to appear as a different descendant. Further, the vampiric contortion will always appear the same way and cannot be changed to allow infinite disguises. 

 

New:

Spoiler

Redlines after change:

-Corcitori face contortion is fixed as one specific ‘face’ that MUST appear vampiric, hideous and inhuman, with eye colours ranging from red, yellow, white or black (optionally across irises, pupils and scleras) as well as hair colours ranging from white, grey or black. Noses and ears can be entirely absent or upturned and batlike. Temporary alopecia can remove hair or on the inverse it can be grown wild and unkempt. Skin can become corpse white, blood red or stony grey with any variation of flaying, scarring or vein discolouration across the entire body. Lips can be split and torn to the extent of revealing the entire jaw. 
-These features will always culminate in a monstrous appearance and can never be nitpicked to create a face that would pass for ‘ordinary’, nor could any of the above replicate the appearance of a different descendant or descendant race. 
-The full transformation will always appear the same way once decided on and cannot be changed to allow infinite disguises or half measures, with the sole exception of teeth and claws that do not necessitate a full transformation.

Purpose:
Currently the full transformation ability as worded is very difficult to accommodate with a minecraft skin. If a character is for instance a bald, moustachioed man with brown eyes, their ‘disguise’ would also be a bald, moustachioed man with brown eyes and very easily identified as the same person by the mechanical limits of skinning, despite the intent of the lore. 

This change also poses to give some better fleshed out examples of how a monstrous vampire might look, for easier player interpretation. It also reasserts the ability already present in the lore's intended purpose: a means by which a vampire could actively go out to hunt and feed in a monstrous and (hopefully) public manner of villainy to encourage interactive roleplay outside of secretive or 'friendly' dependant feeding methods, which tend to be exclusive and far from the average character's view. 

[Metamancy 1773]

+1

[alexmagus 959]

i did this anyways as a corc lol just do it guys they cant stop you especially if they deny this

[Lapidary 494]

+1 I want this pls gimme gimme. Let me be a MONSTER.

[Islamadon 9158]

Amendments/Additions implemented into main lore post. Thank you for your submission. Moving to correct subforum to prevent redundancy and clutter.