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GUARDS KISSING? TWO CHILDREN DEAD?

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On the 17th of Sun's Smile a battle was had on the bridge on the entrance to New Valdev, the battle taking several hours with the demon being put on the back foot for the majority of the battle. Key parts of the battle being when a mage casts a spell directed at the demon, instead knocking 2 friendly soldiers off their feet and onto the bridge's walls, and finally the most notable part was the end, when an unknown soldier would drive their sword into the helmet of the demon, delivering the finishing blow.

When asking nearby bystanders of what they thought of the event, one would respond "Eh, Mitashi doesn't know what happened, just saw dogpile and yokai."

Another would say "I think demons should die" and "I warned the fools to stand back"

 

When an Injured soldier was asked about the battle, they would reply "Please help me" and "I can't stand"

Darkspawn attacks around the world are increasing in number and it's time nations stand up for their people and take up arms against these threats before more innocent lives are hurt, but for now this is L of the newly formed Aevos Inquisition hoping to bring more news to the world soon.

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The boy Prince Aleksandr drew a sharp, shuddering breath as he regarded the mountaintops of Ailmere, wreathed in shadow, and beyond the guarded 'gates' of the Haeseni Kareninas. 

 

He sequestered in his tower room, for the mists that wreathed those distant northern peaks promised horrors yet unseen, and children ought fear the unknown.

 

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I like the outgoing attitude and getting out there making posts of your own, it can be pretty intimidating with the post expectations you see on the forums, so good work (:
 

if I was going to offer some constructive advice, I'd say to try and keep modern colloquialisms like "L" out of posts just to keep it immersive, and that a lot of folks experiment with colouring in their posts (such as different colours for dialogue and for ordinary text) and bolding for titles! 

 

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