kurk brak 70 Share Posted November 18, 2011 (( I don't mean to FUSS or anything. But there are SO many improper ellipses within your story, it makes me want to kill a kitten. Instead of "..." You use, ". . .", making it proper. Do not fail me. I believe in your grammatical abilities, Lucas. ~You-Know-Who! :mrgreen: )) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
susitsu 871 Author Share Posted November 18, 2011 (( I don't mean to FUSS or anything. But there are SO many improper ellipses within your story, it makes me want to kill a kitten. Instead of "..." You use, ". . .", making it proper. Do not fail me. I believe in your grammatical abilities, Lucas. ~You-Know-Who! :mrgreen: )) You could at least compliment the story you know... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
JCQuiinn 168 Share Posted November 19, 2011 Well, looks like I have to kill you now Susitsu. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
susitsu 871 Author Share Posted November 19, 2011 Ive done so many more things in this a lot more than is here now. I'm pretty much worse than a number of the undead now. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
argonian 14254 Share Posted November 19, 2011 Well, looks like I have to kill you now Susitsu. Nah, leave it to me, I still have enough cookies to lure him to my trap. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
susitsu 871 Author Share Posted November 19, 2011 A number of FoA remnants have failed, do you think victory shall be yours so easily? I have prepared for this, I no longer need any cookies! I have the true discipline of a warrior! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cosmik 220 Share Posted November 19, 2011 A number of FoA remnants have failed, do you think victory shall be yours so easily? I have prepared for this, I no longer need any cookies! I have the true discipline of a warrior! You seem to forget that the path to destruction has melons growing alongside it. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Destroyer_Bravo 1054 Share Posted November 23, 2011 A number of FoA remnants have failed, do you think victory shall be yours so easily? I have prepared for this, I no longer need any cookies! I have the true discipline of a warrior! I am a remnant of the FoA, I still bear the patch. At some point, I'll regather the Remnants to reform the FoA. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Samson Option 9652 Share Posted November 23, 2011 [susitsu, kudos for the well-written and developed Lore concerning your character; I applaud such intelligent endeavors and hope you continue this!] Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
susitsu 871 Author Share Posted November 23, 2011 Thank you very much for that Gaius, nicest comment Ive gotten on here :o Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
argonian 14254 Share Posted November 24, 2011 I am a remnant of the FoA, I still bear the patch. At some point, I'll regather the Remnants to reform the FoA. ((Doooooooooo it!)) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kragnak 22 Share Posted November 25, 2011 Although I'm sure you view my RPing as poor, I'm going to compliment your story anyways, because I ain't no troll. Your story is simply amazing and awesome.. and you roleplay extremely well from that one time I've actually met and "fought" you, and you've helped me be a better roleplayer simply by beating my character's face into a wall. I hope we cross paths again, since apparently you've got a story with the FoA.. And I'd like a bite into that too :P Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
susitsu 871 Author Share Posted November 25, 2011 Actually Ahkaerl, I don't go around being over judgmental, and another thing, I found your RPing to be very good in fact, you seem sort of new cause Ive never really seen you, but you did very well in rp. I hope to rp with you more. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lynden 16 Share Posted December 9, 2011 ((really well-done story... thats all I have to say :smile: )) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
susitsu 871 Author Share Posted December 9, 2011 Thanks :D I may start another story at the end of Aegis. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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