parsifal's 6app you ignored all others

[parsifal 1]

b]Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:parsifale

-How old are you?:15 years old

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:time zone central europ belgium france germany...

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes i do but i got dyselexya so i have sentence problems

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: im an normal 15 year old teen i go out whit friends and stuff but in the week i dont go out so mutch so i get bored and go play game's

im honest and kind to those who are kind to me

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: every day 2-3 hours =D

-How long have you played Minecraft?:since alpha

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:rp is to make and new identedy in an strage world at start you got to put soul in it to make it work and tht's wat i always do No good rp charachter whitout soul and belivebelty

-What do you expect this server will be like?:i think this server is an big Hardcore rp server where every body stays in ROLE !! i hope tht and tht its fun the be around here

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Ive played on sgcraft an so called rp server but nobody rly has an character they are there real self =(

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: yes i did

-Name the 4 races on this server:Elfs dwarf humans orc's

-How did you hear about us?:i didnt i was searching for an hardcore rp server and you poped up ^^

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:parsifal

In-Character:

-Character Name: Domar Blacklocks

-What is your Race?: Dwarf

-Biography: i am domar son of imard he was an true servant of the City of Kal'Alras

he helped whit the wall of the Diciples of Valor and Janik and there merged towns he stood up as guard and protected all our home's he saw the fall of charles and the rise of indepentedy now later on just after the fall of charles i have been born domar the one form the depth's i mine whit an great knowllege and architecture my cave's must be Beautifull or just not i am an loyal servent and swear to protect our lands as my dad did The undead will not get in On my,watch later on i find out i was famelie of the blacklocks an Kind and storng dwarven fammely witch i am a part of but also have been honerd to be whit there my brothers in arms and friends now my only goal is to protect them and the dwarven kingdoms but also adventure in teh wold o and one thing FOR The Dwarfs !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-Character Age:400 years

-Character Appearance: and i have two appearance's one an nice armor for fights and if i am ever ye king whit an helmet and my beard split in two whit you will see in the screens i took ^^

-Character Personality: i am an stubborn dwarf who has seen some things i am motivate if you get me tht far im not very fast trusted whit sombody and the one's i trust are like brothers to me and i can be an bit grummphy

-Your ambitions:To honer my dad protect our kingdom and make the finnest mine's the world has seen

-Can your character read or write?: he can read and wirte but has problems whit writing cus he has dylexia to ^^

-Can your character mine?: he is an very good miner i mean comon a dwarf who cant mine is and bird whitch cant fly

-Are you a capable builder?:yes i am

-Can you wield a sword?:i can wield an sword and axe whit great skill

-Enjoy Farming?: an farmer im not to bad maybe yes but its just not in my paht

-Does your character have any special skills?:unstoppel force of killing when it come's to undead no holding back then an good thing or maybe an bad thing

-A screenshot of your skin: cloud i do it whit attachments ^^

-Other Information: i am an realy true Rp i love rp and i do it whit all i got and i hope the others do it to

[Lirinya 4021]

Denied.

You need to re do your whole app.

So many spelling errors, Needs expanding.