jose's submission

[lightjak202 1]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: lightjak202

-How old are you?: 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Florida

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm a gamer I love playing games I have grate experience with role-playing games

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 2 hours a day but 14 hours a week.

-How long have you played Minecraft?: I have been playing since alpha.

-What do you know about role-playing?: It's like when you create a life you must act,think, and be like the character you create.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect it too have battles,towns,and that every one try's too stay in character.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: legendcraft iI left because really no one followed or played by the rules.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have read and agreed to the rules

-Name the 4 races on this server: Orc Dwarf Elf Human.

-How did you hear about us?: gman7066 recommend this game to me since he knows I love

role playing games.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: lightjak202

In-Character:

-Character Name: Dakagor

-What is your Race?: Orc

-Biography: Write a paragraph here. Natarus Zilg Balron was a child when abandoned by his Father. He always believed his Father was a great warrior and saved many lives.but the towns people told him he was a loser a thief and a liar. Natarus was alone and without friends, but Natarus felt a strong power inside of him, the spirits of powerful demons that his father sealed inside of him. He was hated by everyone and eventually left his home town to start a new life on his own to fulfill his dream of getting my own town and to make new friends.the other orcs did not accept him at first he has completed many task for the orcs finally he had one last task to do and that was to win a battle with the chef.The orcs were astonished of the out comes so Natarus was made the leader of the tribe they have fought many wars and have made many friends now it's time for his son Daragor to continue his father's legacy.

-Character Age: 20

-Character Appearance: Red eyed blue hair big tooth Orc.

-Character Personality: Short tempered,quiet,and ambitious. reason he is quiet is that he grows

strong with out being known, and ambitions because he is eager too be the best he can be.

-Your ambitions:What your character want to achieve. Get my own home,get my own town and build up as much as i can with my friends.

-Can your character read or write?: no,I'm too young.

-Can your character mine?: yes,my father was a miner

-Are you a capable builder?: no,I need to work on it.

-Can you wield a sword?: yes but can't wield well.

-Enjoy Farming?: yes, mother was a farmer.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Yes, was chosen to be possessed by demons so that he can go though difficult tasks with more eas.

[Mercius 15]

Denied.

You must wait for two days to pass from your last denial. Make sure you've read all the rules:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/4333-must-read-to-all-new-applicants-please-read/

But I will say that your answers still feel rushed, they need to be longer and more in depth. Your bio could use expanding too.

Take more time on your application! Spend the next two days adding as much as you can to it.