application to LOTC

[Divinus 179]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Divinusxiphias

-How old are you?: 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: EST, Unitedstates, new york city

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: it is my native language but i do tend to make a few mistakes here and then, after all, i am only human.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a quiet kid who likes to play online games that have structure and discipline.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 3-4 hours at the least

-How long have you played minecraft?: since it came out with creative in 2009

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I know that roleplaying is where you can be what ever you want. You can have an entire new life in a role playing game and that your limit to this is your imagination and of course the admins .Some role-playing I have done is in runescape where we had staged fights and battles, but that was only fun the first 5 times we did it.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: i expect that it is exactly as you have protrayed it with your youtube videos and from what i have heard from my friends who have played on this server, it is exactly as so.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: i played on OMGWTFHAX server with supre and i left because of land issues with other players.

-Name the 4 races on this server. orcs,elfs,humans, dwarfs

-How did you hear about us?: your trailer, petri and the yogscast

-Did you vote?: yes

-What was your favourite Law?: no griefing (always a favorite)

-What was your least favourite Law?: 1337 speak ( i dont know what that is)

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? Divinusxiphias

In-Character:

-Character Name: Divinus

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: Divinusxiphias

-Biography: Divinus was born in the great city of oren to parents who had lost there nobility titles when a group of savage Dwarves who had believed that Divinus's father had taken one of there mineshafts and burned it down(when it was actually a group of radical elves) had destroyed there town in the north. Divinus's family was poor; his mother had ran away and became a mushroom soup addict after they had lost there land, his father had a downstairs redstone mechanics shop where he built machines for the people of Oren.His Father was fascinated with the technology of Aegis, hoping that one day he might invent a machine that will take back his land from the Dwarves that had conquered it many years ago.

around the age of 10, Divinus's Father was approached by two men with hoods and robes. One had a hammer, while the other had a bow and a arsenal of arrows. At that exact time, Divinus just happened to be turning the corner, looking for his ball that had just bounced off of the roof. As Divinus picked up his ball, he noticed the men that had confronted his father were acting rather aggressive. Divinus, curious, walked over to see what was happening. as Divinus's father had heard him coming his way, he quickly screamed, "Divinus run". at that moment the two hooded man unsheathed there weapons and pounded and shot at Divinus's father, revealing that they were the Dwarves sent to kill his father to finally eliminate any chance of him retaking the land that once belonged to him. Divinus, horrified for his life, ran back to his home as the Dwarves chased him down. When Divinus got home, he ran downstairs to his father's workshop where he could try and find a place to hide. As Divinus started throwing around his fathers mechanics, he accidentally stepped on a pressure plate which released a hole in the ground. not noticing the hole, he kept looking for a place to hide from his fathers assassins. At that moment, the Dwarves had come into the basement. Divinus, scared out of his mind, started backing up from the approaching Dwarves when he slipped and fell into the hole.

As he regained his consciousness from his fall down, he noticed a bright light which appeared down a hidden hallway. thinking that this could be the way out, he walked down the hallway un expecting of what he was about to stumble upon. When he got to the end of the hallway, there was just a wall and a button. Divinus having a bad experience with his last redstone encounter, pondered on what the outcome of pushing the button would be. dispite his common sense, he pushed the button only to fall down into a room with a redstone torch, the fragments of a golden hoe, and a rather old note. Curious as usual, he picked up the note and began to read. as he began reading, he was shocked at what the paper had stated, saying that his family was descendants of a aengul and that one of the aengul descendants would bring about peace and order through a tremendous city in the world of aegis. The paper looked like it had been down here for centuries. Divinus, confused and angry that he was never told about such things, knocked over the redstone torch leading to a room full of light and a tomb. He opened the tomb to find an old clock, a bow and arrow, some redstone incasing the body inside. Divinus, intent on finding the facts of his families history, set out from the dungeon where his adventure began.

-Character Age: 40

-Character Appearance: dons a black robe and has green eyes one that is now glass from a battle with a ghast which forever scared his eye. he has gray hair from years of studying and from the stress of the thought of waking up in the morning with an arrow in his chest or if he is going to wake up at all.

-Character Personality: rather quiet, untrustworthy to people he believes are aggressive and try to oppress him and to naive people. he is a very good friend if you have earned his trust and will fight to the death for his friends. always is a friend to the intellectuals of Aegis.

-Your ambitions: to create a city on an island which has a diverse economy and is well protected from all people who come with greed and lust to destroy it and to find divinus's link to the aenguls from which he believes he is a descendant from.

-Can your character read or write?: yes, divinus is very studious and is always recording his events and findings

-Can your character mine?: only to gain the essentials as iron and cobble

-Are you a capable builder? yes, he must be in order to build his grand city.

-Can you wield a sword?: no, he has a hatred of swords since his fathers death.

-Enjoy Farming?: he does, but only in his free time as he finds it relaxing but refuses to make a living out of it.

-Does your character have any special skills?:] he is very crafty with a bow, but will eventually cease using it if he ever aquires the power of the magics.

-A screenshot of your skin: http:/www.minecraftskins.com/api.php?mode=preview&type=both&id=236083 -if that didn't work, i have no other idea on how to show you my skin.

-Other Information:[/b it would be an honor to join this server.

[Nightmareeeee 36]

Your Application Has Been:

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Unrealistic Events [X]

Incorrect Lore [X]

Power/Metagaming [X]

Contradicting Statements [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [X]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

Other Comments:

Bassically, to get your application accepted, you need to re-read your application and to try find out what problems are in your application. You know it is unrealistic, you know that the lore in your biography is incorrect. My suggestion is to have a look through the lore about towns and what actually is in the North. You should also look at the ascended page, as you are powergaming, around those areas.