Wahsrofs application

[Wahsrof 11]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Wahsrof

-How old are you?: 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Mid-west U.S.A.

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:Yes, but i will make mistakes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Im known to be impatient but other than that i love RP and i like having fun.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: I'm able to play as much as 25 hours a week and at the least 10 hours.

-How long have you played minecraft?: I have been playing Minecraft for about 2 years.

-What do you know about roleplaying?: I played a bit of RP in garrysmod and I played alot of RP in Half-Life. I understand that it is taking on a role of a character

-What do you expect this server will be like?: A adventure around every turn and a great community.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: some PVP servers.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes, i have read the rules completely.

-Name the 4 races on this server: Elves, Orcs, Humans, Dwarves.

-How did you hear about us?: Youtube person by the name of Candelstick or something?

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: Wahsrof

In-Character:

-Character Name: Valir Thole

-What is your Race?: Half elf.

-Biography: A quit but smart boy, Looking a lot like his father, and with some of the same skills, He is around 6 foot, brown hair and green eyes all the same. His father had impregnated his wife before being sent of to war, The wife had the child before the father returned, and died giving birth. His father had no idea about the birth of his son, someone had raised the boy and told him when he was of age that they were not his father, once he had found his name he sent a letter telling him of his story, and then headed out to find his father in Oren.

-Character Age: He is 22 years old.

-Character Appearance: A man in simple clothes with brown hair and green eyes and muttonchops. His eyes tend to glow in the dark a little.

-Character Personality: A quite boy, doesn't like conflict unless he is completely enraged

-Your ambitions: He wants to find his father, and go into what ever business he has.

-Can your character read or write?: Very well indeed.

-Can your character mine?: Yes, he spent a few years mining diamond.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes, but he is poor at it.

-Can you wield a sword?: To defend his land, he will do what it takes.

-Enjoy Farming?: A man is defined by the sweat on his brow, so yes.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Yes, he can read, fight, and use a bit of magic.

-Skin: http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4eb9b2340c65a9315981488524312173115931198

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography and also an indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality etc... Also you need to explain your character traits in terms of your character, why can he mine? why can he fight or not etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detail into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore and restriction. Then once you finish reworking repost it after the specified time (48 hours or so), if you are looking for inspiration look at some other apps or the examples pinned.