Malas's application

[cronocio 6]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: cronocio

-How old are you?: 11

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: CST, USA

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: English yes. Grammar not as much.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am a Christian, I like to tell jokes and play minecraft.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 2 to 10 hours, depends on how much school work I have.

-How long have you played minecraft?: one year

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I haven't done much RP so it will be a new challenge for me, but I should be a good RP person.

-What do you expect this server will be like?:I think it would have adventures, wars, and very fun stuff! I’d love to be of help to the server too!

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I’ve played on a server called webciv, and my friends server, I am not leaving them yet, I think this server will be better than the rest though, & I am still playing my friends because of a series we are doing. And webciv is getting kind of dull. There is not that much adventure and action like this server would have.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: yes I’v read all of the rules and I agree to all the rules. And the lore was very cool! I got a better understanding of the race I wanted

-Name the 4 races on this server: Human, Elf, Orc, and Dwarf.

-How did you hear about us?: My friend Salmeer told me about the server and it sounded awesome!

-Did you vote?: Yes I voted.

-What was your favorite Law?: No griefing, webciv gets griefed a lot I’d love to see non griefed areas.

-What was your least favorite Law?: I didn't like that you can't use your soul stone to run away from a fight/getting randomly attacked.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: saphorn

In-Character:

-Character Name: Malas

-What is your Race?: An Elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum  forum account: saphorn

-Biography: Malas was born and raised in Oasis Village. He was the only child in his family, his mom and dad got killed on the way back from a trip to an old friends house. Malas waited.. and waited, and waited, but his mom and dad never came back. He was only 8 years old. Two days later, he was taking a walk and saw his mom and dad dead. He cried for hours, his moms friend saw him crying and took him in until he was old enough to live on his own. He loves archery and is very good at it. A group of Orcs attacked the village and his house was destroyed in the raid. So he travelled to human and dwarven city’s to learn the ways of a warrior. This is where Malas’ journey embarks.

-Character Age:23

-Character Appearance: Red uniform, Brown goggles, Iron bracers/shoulder guards, Brown boots/gloves, Green sword on back, Gold colored rope around his chest, Yellow hair, Green eyes, Gold belt.

-Character Personality: funny, nice, and serious at times of war,loves to shoot his bow every day, reads a lot, travels when not deployed in the Oasis village guard, follows all the laws of his village.

-Your ambitions: Travel, write books/read books, run every morning.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes Malas can to read and write very well.

-Can your character mine?: no

-Are you a capable builder?: yes

-Can you wield a sword?: yes

-Enjoy Farming?: yes

-Does your character have any special skills?: Malas thinks fast in life so he is very good at strategizing fast.]

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: Malas is skilled in the art of the sword & bow. He is an excellent fighter & loves farming. Malas means war bow in the Elven language.

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [X]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Power/Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [X]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [X]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Your definition for Role Play is invalid.

And please... they didn't get killed by orcs. I see this too often. Change it into something else.

Oh yeah, Oasis Village doesn'texist.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

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