dorian2121's application 3rd try.

[dorian2121 0]

http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4ec6d631a9beb14912028023244957499749134

Out-Of-Character:dorian2121

-Minecraft Account Name:dorian2121

-How old are you?:10

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:canada/eastern time

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:yes.I think i do.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:im very nice and caring.and I love people.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:48 hrs

-How long have you played minecraft?:9 months

-What do you know about roleplaying? act like your really there and act like your in that fantasy

How long have you been doing it?since I started minecraft.

What kind?:fantasy

-What do you expect this server will be like?:very fun and exciting. and also financial purpose.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: not many and they wernt my taste.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? yes and I really think there resonable.

What about the lore?: yes.

-Name the 4 races on this server.humans,elves,orcs and dwarves.

-How did you hear about us?:a youtuber called petrithegamernerd.

-Did you vote?:yes.

-What was your favourite Law?:no griefing.

-What was your least favourite Law?: none think the law is great.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? dorian2121

In-Character: dorian2121

-Character Name: the knight_arezio.

-What is your Race?: orc.

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: dorian2121.

-Biography: Prince of the Universe,with two dogs by his side,because his dogs can sense spirts not of this universe,he has a sense of humor, loves making jokes about elfs and humans. He loves hanging out with dwarfs,getting drunk,loves all animals,not a very good listener,lives by his on rules sometimes,he will fight for his country,he will protect animals and his own kind with his life.He has two dogs names princess(female) and black_knight(male)they sense whenever evil spirts are around.He has one flaw is he is not very fast but he is very powerful and also his dogs are train to kill elfs and humans on sight unless told not to do so. He lives off the land,and very unforgiving, because his mother and father were killed when he was 12 when a wave of evil humans and killer elves attacked his village and murderd his family infront of him includeing his brother his sister. He uses his dogs too seek out evil spirts, because they saved him from the killer elves and evil humans.His goal is to rid the universe of evil and the darkness it brings, in his mind "pain" is "love", he will use his special powers to extract as much pain as he possibly can against the evil humans and killer elfs.

-Character Age: 40

-Character Appearance:dirty looking skin with a scar on his right eye and 3 battle scars on both of his arms and he has red shoulder pads and also a big jaw with 2 big teeth.He also has a big brown belt with a skull of an elf on the front.

-Character Personality: a nice and vicios orc that very powerful.but very kind with animals but he hates elfs but he loves dwarfs.he cirtenly despizes humans.hes very strong but kind of mean and also does not listen very much but he is very humorus.

-Your ambitions: to be a millionare and help charity.

-Can your character read or write?: yes.He is on the writing side not so much the reading.

-Can your character mine?: yes.very fast and he loves to sell what he mines of craft stuff for animals.

-Are you a capable builder? yes he's very architectural. But not a very nice builder he is sometimes picky with the meterials he uses.

-Can you wield a sword?: very well.he can slice a human in half i 2 seconds!

-Enjoy Farming?: very much.he uses the wheat to feed his 2 dogs.

-Does your character have any special skills?: yes bare knuckle fighting.but hes very capable with anemils expecialy cats and dogs.

]-A screenshot of your skin: up at the top.

-Other Information: he has 2 dogs and there very good at hunting he could kill a animal in a instant but he would never harm a animal.

[Whitebeard 126]

Common reasons people are denied:

-It has bad grammar or Punctuation.

-Your biography was too short or needs more detail.

-Your Biography didn't link to the lore of Aegis.

-You obviously didn't read the lore.

-Fix the layout: This could be from having bolds everywhere or simply being hard to read.

-It lacked effort.

-Your skin isn't RP.

-Needed an actual picture of your skin.

-You didn't include a skin link or it didn't work.

-Your application was too short.

These are just some of the reasons it could have been

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