AZNRiceAZn requesting to join

[AZNRice 0]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

AZNRiceAZN

-How old are you?:

13

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

PST USA California

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

I am good at English and good at grammar, but i might spell things wrong sometimes so dont mind please.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am easy going, and like playing games. During school people like me, and they think I am a good person to be a friend of. I might be annoying and weird, but I can fix it if you guys dont want me to do it in this server. Just to tell you guys i beg a lot too.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

i think 7 days a week because I'm a extreme gamer, and like to play with alot of server too when I'm on minecraft

-How long have you played Minecraft?:

i played minecraft about 3 months now and i am a op on some of the browser free classic server.

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:

Role playing is a game where you die and such. Most role playing games is 3d not 2d

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I expect it to be like other role playing games, and more fun then other servers i ever played before. I hope i get addicted to this server! :)

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I played a lot of servers since i started, but cant name them. I left them because i lost interest of playing the server. I hope this server will be different

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes I am really like the rules that you guys created

-Name the 4 races on this server:

Orcs Human Dwarf and Elf

-How did you hear about us?:

I hear it from a youtube channel. The person had his own shop and a good house where it is next to a mine ground.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

AZNRiceAZN

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Eric Quan

-What is your Race?:

Orcs

-Biography:

I am a orc where long ago I was a little monster. I liked playing around with everything my parents give me. I am very kind, and like to mess around with people, and probably you too. When i was 2 i learned how to walk, and my parents was proud of me. I was the number one liked student to play with at school. When i switch school it was in 2nd grade no one liked me and always tried to get me in trouble like today. I went through my elementery life, but it was hard because people teased me for no reason. I think it was how i dress, and what clothes I wore during elementery school year. In middle school and today I got to meet with my church friends every day and we like playing around, having fun, and pushing each other around. I still get tease tho, but i am not teased wit the people who i lasted through elementery school and 7th grade. People thinks I am a orc because how tall i am.

-Character Age:

13

-Character Appearance: I cant take care of my self, and i like messing around.

-Character Personality:

Shy, Sweat, and Energetic

-Your ambitions:

to be a nice person to mess around with

-Can your character read or write?:

Yes

-Can your character mine?:

Yes

-Are you a capable builder?:

Yes

-Can you wield a sword?:

Yes

-Enjoy Farming?:

Yes

-Does your character have any special skills?:

Yes

-A screenshot of your skin:

http://www.minecraftskins.info/feralchaos.html this is my skin because i do not know how to screen shot it. Sorry :( and i cant find file. :(

-Other Information:

I hope i get accepted :)

[Wizard 125]

Look, I am not on the application team or a GM, but I can tell you a few things.

1) Bio is way too short. What in the world does the bio have to do with this server? This is the worst bio I have ever seen in a new applicant.

2) Give much more detail on why your character is proficient at absolutely every thing. Which is not very realistic. I haven't known many orcs who can read and write well.

3) You have absolutely no clue what roleplaying actually is. You said, "Roleplaying is a game in which you die and such". This is possibly the worst explanation of what a roleplaying server.

4) The skin is definitely not an orc. Choose a skin that looks like an orc.

5) You say that you are good at grammar and english, yet I can point out over 20 mistakes.

Next time, overall take much more time on your application. The GM's and App Team need to know why you will benefit the server. Not just your average player is allowed on. Also, don't pm people to read your application. It will be read eventually.