My application v2

[darktoes 0]

Here I go!

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: darktoes

-How old are you?: 12

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Australia

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I'm not very fit and spend most of my time on the computer, I like reading and enjoy learning things about most topics. I'm very mature and make jokes often. I run my own server but have been meaning to try this one for a while.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:Uh... Maybe... 15 hours? If I really like it. Of course if our quota runs out it will go to about 0 hours.

-How long have you played minecraft?: Since mid-alpha.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I how roleplaying works and what it's meant to do... In theory. The only actual server I played where we were roleplaying was on a server that I left soon after we started roleplaying. It was just some basic stuff, mostly revolving around our different personalities and roles in a small town we set up.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: I played as a ghost for a while and it looks like a lot of fun, although as in most servers I find that the RP is a little slack and most of the buildings are modern or... just plain weird, but there's nothing wrong with that, it makes it more fun!!

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have played Creeperville (R.I.P), because the admin was a meanie. Sparkcraft because the admin was a meanie. Octavian, still playing but I think it's dead. The Kingdom Of Creepers, my own server. A few others but I can't think of them off hand.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes and yes.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Dwarf, Elf, Orc, Human

-How did you hear about us?: I don't remember, it was like a month ago but I only got around to applying today.

-Did you vote?: Yes, on all 3 websites.

-What was your favourite Law?: No destroying of the worlds landscape. I think a minecraft world is a beautiful thing to be cherished, why would you want to hack big hunks out?

-What was your least favourite Law?: You must have a forum account, I don't like registering for things that I don't know much about, but it seems OK.. for now.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? darktoes.

In-Character:

-Character Name: Eric Cantwell

-What is your Race?: Human

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: http://www.lordofthe...28043-darktoes/

-Biography: Born (32 years prior to present date) under the sign of the Hoe and the Bowl (Symbolizing hard work and providing for yourself and your family), in the city of Al'Khazar. His parents Gavan Cantwell, his father, a loyal and hard-working father capable of providing for his family and able to send his son to school. And Dianna Cantwell, his mother, always with a smile and a wave for any passing friends or just random strangers, with a heart of gold and some of the best cooking in Aegis she loved her husband and son dearly. His parents were killed in a fire the day before he turned 13, he never knew what happened but suffice to say that he didn't think it was an accident. He grieved for the next few days and was helped by some family friends, he stayed with them for a few days helping on their farm but soon felt the thirst for adventure and danger, then next day he set off to find his fortune, of course after only 2 weeks he found himself in the gutter next to the ashen remains of his home, cold, hungry and bruised all over. As he picked himself up, counted his remaining 30 Minas he realised that he needed to get a job soon. As he wandered around the agricultural district he noticed a sign in a window of a large farm house "HELP WANTED, APPLY WITHIN" it read, he immediately went inside and accepted the job, he was to help on the farm in whichever way the master told him, whether it be feeding the pigs, milking the cows or tilling the fields. As time went on his muscles grew and his skill increased. With the money he was earning he managed to buy himself an Iron Sword and enough wood and tools to repair the farmhouse and bring the farm up and running again. In his spare time he worked, rebuilding and replanting, until he was finished. He told the master that he could not work for him any longer as his own home needed his full attention, he understood and gave him his next paycheck and a few seeds to get started. And so, in just over a year the boy who lost his parents in a fire and repaired his life and now had his own home and farm. 18 years later he is sill tilling planting and harvesting the fields but as war loomed and the land seemed generally unhappy he finds that he must work doubly hard to defend and continue all he has strived to create and uphold.

-Character Age: 32

-Character Appearance: A farmer through and through, from his bright cheery grey eyes, dark brown hair to his simple tunic and breeches with a leather vest.

-Character Personality: Loyal and hard working, well learned but prone to angry outbursts.

-Your ambitions: To run a nice farm and hopefully get some hired help at some point.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes.

-Can your character mine?: No.

-Are you a capable builder? Yes, very much so.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes.

-Enjoy Farming?: Yes.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Good with plants and animals but can wield a sword well to protect himself and his property.

-A screenshot of your skin:

-Other Information: I originally posted my first application a few months ago but was rejected, a few weeks ago I rewrote my application but it still hasn't been reviewed, I PMed a few people about it but never got an answer. I figure it would just be easiest to repost it on the forums.

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Powergaming [ ]

Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [X]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

You forgot your Role Playing name.

And is the derp in your biography?

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

[darktoes 0]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [ ]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Powergaming [ ]

Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [X]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

You forgot your Role Playing name.

And is the derp in your biography?

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

So... I need to take out the bits about what happened after my character's parent's house burned down?

My name? My name! I dunno how I missed that! I guess ctrl+c, ctrl+v isn't perfect, I'll fix that right away.

The derp I added for fun, I don't think I ever wrote that much for a game in one sitting before and couldn't really resist. I'll go take it out.

You say that I missed a bit, is that just the bit about my IC name? I'm about to go fix that. If I missed anything else could you let me know? I copy/pasted it from the pinned thread on the forum but I guess something could have been added recently that I missed?