Cole Mertz's Application EDIT: 2nd try! :D

[colemertz 0]

Out-Of-Character: Cole Mertz

-Minecraft Account Name: colemertz

-How old are you?: 14

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: USA, texas, central standard

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: yes

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am cole mertz, and i like minecraft and skyrim. I go to school, eat food. I also enjoy playing football and computers.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: too much D_D. 3 hours on weekdays, too much on weekends (5+)

-How long have you played Minecraft?: since beta 1.2

-What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: Role playing is being a different character than in real life, and holding that character throughout the story in result of having a good time.

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-What do you expect this server will be like?: I expect this server to have epic faction bases, a friendly community, and lots and lots of beards :D

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Well, i play on a whole guacamole bowl of servers, but my main server is Animus-network, i am still with them and will always be. I like good servers, thats all i have to say.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes sir, or ma'am

-Name the 4 races on this server: human, orcs, dwarves and elves

-How did you hear about us?: You guys booth at minecon

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: colemertz

In-Character: Cole Mertz

-Character Name: Cole Mertz

-What is your Race?: human

-Biography:Cole Mertz Awoke in the cloud temple knowing nothing. All he remembers is a huge explosion and blanked out. He noticed seeing the great castle of Oren in the background, he shall travel to the Kingdom of Oren and try to find any evidence of his past life! He also remebers a hooded figure running off with his brother, which he must find and kill!

-Character Age: 25

-Character Appearance: long brown hair, balaclava on most of the time, 6,3 and sunglasses

-Character Personality: A nice young man who likes too kill stuff. Has a hatred for ponies, and always says "yo dawg".

-Your ambitions: To become the new ruler of the humans! muahahahaha

-Can your character read or write?: Before he killed his parents, he went to the best schools in wherever he came from o_O

-Can your character mine?: He can mine, preferably with Diamond picks

-Are you a capable builder?: He can build a good house is he trys hard enough, but in general, he is a decent builder

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, and very proficiently.

-Enjoy Farming?: No, he rathers to kill what he eats.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Tnt and swords.

-A screenshot of your skin:

I can change it to a more, "fitting" skin if needed.

-Other Information: I saw you guys at minecon :D

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X]

Powergaming [ ]

Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Dwemmer don't exist. The four races are stated in the lore. Please read this before making an application. It is located on the sidebar in the main website.

Next, TNT doesn't exist in Aegis either. Your biography is short and needs improvement as well. Try adding a birthplace that is in the lore, and city names and the such.

--Simon

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

[colemertz 0]

Bump

[colemertz 0]

*waits*