evantheman13 App

[evantheman13 0]

u]Out-Of-Character:-Minecraft Account Name:evantheman13

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: losusian USA

Do you have a good grip of eglish:yes but i dont like useing periods and commas

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:Im very nerdy and smart love mine craft and food

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:21 hours minimum

How long have you played minecraft?:1 year

What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?:i have played on a couple roleplay servers and sadly i made a DND rip off with my friends and played that for a while

What do you expect this server will be like?:very fun and large

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:Lancecraft the leader of my town was a jerk

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?:i love the lore and like the goverment systems

Name the 4 races on this server Orc ftw Elf Human Dwafe

How did you hear about us?:Fourm

Did you vote?:all but one site it didnt work i think number 2

What was your favourite Law?:no greifing outside of war

What was your least favourite Law?:i dont really have one

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?evantheman13

In-Character:Character Name:Galithar

What is your Race?:ORC

Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account:evantheman13

Biography:I was five when my parents gave me my first sword my first kill was a rabbit in a cave at ten i learned how to use my fathers forge 13 hit my first human a kid from some city i dont know the name of 16 klled my first man walking and a bandit attacked i struck him in the kneck

Character Age:18

Character Appearance:7 foot green strong

Character Personality:hot headed smart hard working fun strong

Your ambitions:i have the dream of becoming a military asitant

Can your character read or write?:yes

Can your character mine? yes

Are you a capable builder?yes

Can you wield a sword?:yes

Enjoy Farming?yes

Does your character have any special skills?:forging redstone dimplomat

A screenshot of your skin

Other Information:[in character]I WANT PLAY NOW

my screen shot is not work will try and post later

[Slayer15855 3]

Denied.

You need an extensive and indepth character. That means you need an awesome biography (you need to develop your biography a bit more) and also an indepth analysis of your characters ambitions, personality etc... Also you need to explain your character traits in terms of your character, why can he mine? why can he fight or not etc... You character is the entire point of this game, you need to put a huge amount of effort and detail into it. It is basically a second person. Make it fun and interesting but not ridiculous, and always within the lore and restriction. Then once you finish reworking repost it after the specified time (48 hours or so), if you are looking for inspiration look at some other apps or the examples pinned.

[Angela 7]

ummm. I know u don't like using periods or commas, but they help a lot. they help keep it organized and easier to read. plus, it doesn't take that much time to put in.

other than that, I would make a larger bio. get personal with him. also, don't forget to be realistic. his first kill was a rabbit, and he killed it with a sword... unless you are a super ninja, that pretty much impossible. and also, post WHY he can and can't do stuff.

those are just a few suggestions I have. take it or leave it. I know it's hard to get feedback from the app checkers because they are reviewing like, 50 other apps each.

[evantheman13 0]

Thanks