MRConers application

[Aodran 12]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Lefardo

-How old are you?: I´m 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: +2 Greenwich (Finland)

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I´m fair, helpful and smart player and I have never been kicked out from any server. I like to play minecraft and it is one of my favourite games.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: About 10-15 hours.

-How long have you played minecraft?: Since last spring.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I have´nt got a change to roleplay much but I know the roleplaying rules, stick in your character... I like the whole roleplaying idea and I`ll trust that the roleplay is working perfctly on this server.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Exiting, fun and I could finaly get a chance to roleplay like it supposed to be done.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Legendary craft and ImDeity Kingdoms. I left them becouse they promiced roleplaying and the cold´nt keep that promice.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes I read all the rules and I did´nt find the lore part in your forum in www.minecraftforum.net. It seems to be wiped off.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Dwarfs, Elves, Humans and Orcs. There are also Undeads and Acendeds.

-How did you hear about us?: I googled "minecraft roleplay server" and it lead me to youtube where a watched the trailer.

-Did you vote?: Yes I did. Twice now when my first application was denied.

-What was your favourite Law?: No use of hacks or modified clients.

-What was your least favourite Law?: None of them. They were all fair and without them this server could be a little crappy.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? MrConer.

In-Character:

-Character Name: Aodran.

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: MRConer

-Biography: Aodran was found in a ditch, when he was only a newborn baiby. An Young woman find him and took him home. Aodrans father and mother were both humans, but they decided to raise a baiby they find. Aodrans father was a farmer near Al'Khazar. When Aodran has spend fiveteen yers of his life on a farm, he desided to leave on his own paths. Aodran wandered in a lands of Aegis many yers. He face many dangers but survived thems and on his travels he learned how to fight whit sword an how to shoot whit bow. When he reached a age of fifty, he decided to get a home on a city and he choosed Laurelin where he stayed. Aodran is still making adventures across the land. Aodran is making his living by killing mosters.

-Character Appearance: Aodran is a man and he has a long blond hair, pointy ears (like all elves) and he likes to wear green. Aodran has`nt got a beard. Aodran is sometimes having difficults to wipe of his arrogant smile.

-Character Personality: Aodran hates to lose and he loves to other other person to admit that Aodran was right. He likes to learn new things and he is very ambious. He is alsois very greedy of power, but under all thes faults he is a true friend and a pleasant gentleman.

-Your ambitions: To explore the world of Aegis and mayby some day to start my own kingdom, or to get as a High Prince of elven council.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes, on elf and on human.

-Can your character mine?: Not so well, but he can.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, but not as well as I can shoot whit a bow.

-Enjoy Farming?: Not so much.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Aodran can shoot an ant from hundreds of meters away.

-A screenshot of your skin: here is a link http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/elven-crusader/

-Other Information: No.

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name: Lefardo

-How old are you?: I´m 16

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence: +2 Greenwich (Finland)

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I´m fair, helpful and smart player and I have never been kicked out from any server. I like to play minecraft and it is one of my favourite games.

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?: About 10-15 hours.

-How long have you played minecraft?: Since last spring.

-What do you know about roleplaying? How long have you been doing it? What kind?: I have´nt got a change to roleplay much but I know the roleplaying rules, stick in your character... I like the whole roleplaying idea and I`ll trust that the roleplay is working perfctly on this server.

-What do you expect this server will be like?: Exiting, fun and I could finaly get a chance to roleplay like it supposed to be done.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Legendary craft and ImDeity Kingdoms. I left them becouse they promiced roleplaying and the cold´nt keep that promice.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules? What about the lore?: Yes I read all the rules and I did´nt find the lore part in your forum in www.minecraftforum.net. It seems to be wiped off.

-Name the 4 races on this server. Dwarfs, Elves, Humans and Orcs. There are also Undeads and Acendeds.

-How did you hear about us?: I googled "minecraft roleplay server" and it lead me to youtube where a watched the trailer.

-Did you vote?: Yes I did. Twice now when my first application was denied.

-What was your favourite Law?: No use of hacks or modified clients.

-What was your least favourite Law?: None of them. They were all fair and without them this server could be a little crappy.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name? MrConer.

In-Character:

-Character Name: Aodran.

-What is your Race?: Elf

-Lordofthecraft.net/forum forum account: MRConer

-Biography: Aodran was found in a ditch, when he was only a newborn baiby. An Young woman find him and took him home. Aodrans father and mother were both humans, but they decided to raise a baiby they find. Aodrans father was a farmer near Al'Khazar. When Aodran has spend fiveteen yers of his life on a farm, he desided to leave on his own paths. Aodran wandered in a lands of Aegis many yers. He face many dangers but survived thems and on his travels he learned how to fight whit sword an how to shoot whit bow. When he reached a age of fifty, he decided to get a home on a city and he choosed Laurelin where he stayed. Aodran is still making adventures across the land. Aodran is making his living by killing mosters.

-Character Appearance: Aodran is a man and he has a long blond hair, pointy ears (like all elves) and he likes to wear green. Aodran has`nt got a beard. Aodran is sometimes having difficults to wipe of his arrogant smile.

-Character Personality: Aodran hates to lose and he loves to other other person to admit that Aodran was right. He likes to learn new things and he is very ambious. He is alsois very greedy of power, but under all thes faults he is a true friend and a pleasant gentleman.

-Your ambitions: To explore the world of Aegis and mayby some day to start my own kingdom, or to get as a High Prince of elven council.

-Can your character read or write?: Yes, on elf and on human.

-Can your character mine?: Not so well, but he can.

-Are you a capable builder?: Yes.

-Can you wield a sword?: Yes, but not as well as I can shoot whit a bow.

-Enjoy Farming?: Not so much.

-Does your character have any special skills?: Aodran can shoot an ant from hundreds of meters away.

-A screenshot of your skin: here is a link http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/elven-crusader/

-Other Information: No.

[Blawharag 277]

Please do not repost your application within 48 hours. Take this time to expand upon your character, proof-read your application, read up on server lore and rules and fix the problems with your app. Feel free to contact me on either the Teamspeak channel or through the forums if you have any questions, comments or concerns.

#1 While you did improve upon your bio, it is still a tad too short. Please expand upon it some and proof read it for grammar errors, which run rampant throughout your application.

#2 You give no explanation as to why you character can read, write, mine or build. Please give detailed explanations to these and why you character can do them. If the traits do not make sense for your character then do not take them, it would be poor RP to do so.

#3 Your "special skill" is powergaming. Not even a master archer could claim to be capable of such a feat.