[Denied]Brvhrt1005's 2 Application

[brvhrt1005 86]

Minecraft Account Name : brvhrt1005

-How Old are you : 16

- Country Of residence USA

- Do you have a good grip on English Language - I think I have A good grip with it But if I am REALLY tired I will Probably Misspell a Few Words

- Small 2 - 3 sentences about Myself - Im a student And most of my day when Im not Busy making videos for my YouTube Channel I play Minecraft and Some Xbox Games And I LOVE to Role Play In games

- How Much Time I will spend on the server - A fairly good Amount Of time Like 2-3 Hours a day

- How Long have you played Minecraft - I Will Like to say about a Year Or Maybe a little Bit less

- What do I know about Role Playing - I think Role Playing is about becoming a New Person Someone that is not yourself And becoming something greater

- What do you expect the server to be like - I have seen a few Video and I think the server is going to be like an Adventure

- I have played on Alot of servers In my time of Minecraft But The reason I have Left Is Because someone Greifed my house And this has happen mostly every time I have Been on a server But then me and my friend found out how to make our own server so we did that and I found out about Lord of the Craft and thought it would be fun to do RP in Minecraft

- Have you Read And Agree to the Rules - Yes I have Read them Fully and Understand Them and Know what I can and Cant do

- What are the 4 races on the server - Well I think The Main Ones are Humans Orcs Elves and Dwarves But There is The Undead As seen in the Videos I have Watched

- How did you Hear About us - I was watching Youtube Videos and I looked up a channel I used to watch PetriTheGamerNerd and I saw he had Videos Of Lord Of The Craft So I watched them and thought it looked cool so im applying

- What is your Fourm Name - brvhrt1005

In Character

Character Name - Luke Campbell

Biography: As a Little Dwarf Luke was quite The Adventurist He climb the biggest Mountain At the Age of 8 and Found His first Diamond at the Age of 13, Luke Was Born On the Outskirts of Aegis, Where it was cold, and Snowy. When He was Young His Father Always Cared For Him and Taught Him Special Abilitys Like Sword Fighting, Mining. All of these Abilitys Helped Luke Through the Rest of his Life. He left his Parents at the Age of 15 To set off for Adventure! Now at the Age Of 198 he Has been on Many Adventures

and Quest and Each has Taught him a new skill That have made Him Stronger Inside And Out. Earlier That Year He Was No Where Close Aegis, But He Had gotten a letter, From His Parents and It had stated That They Had Been Robbed By The Undead! And Now They Lived on the Paths Oh Aegis Living Off Valuble Things They found on the road . . . And They Needed Luke To come Help Them!

Luke Came To The City as Quick as he could, But when he arrives His Parents dident show up to the meeting spot. He looked everywhere for them Only to find They had Froze to death. . . Luke Now Knew what he Must do, He decides to stay In Angis And Avenge His Parents. Now He Roams The Pathways In search for any Undead.

What Is your Race - Dwarves

Character Age - 198

Character Appearance - A Fierce young Adventurer With A Sword And Is ready For his Next Adventure He Looks Like A Pirate with His clothes and Hat. He is A brown Haired Dwarf With a Long Beard

Character Personality - Luke Is an adventurist young Dwarf And Believes he can Take On any Challenge You Throw at Him He is Not Afraid of Anyone Or Anything and Will not Be Defeated, He is a Nice Dwarf and Likes To Treat People In the same way They Treat Him.

Your Ambition : Luke Ambition is to Becoming the Greatest and Riches Of ALL in the Land of Aegis, He also Wants to becomeing a famous dwarf for the adventures he goes on.

Can your Character Read Or Write - Yes, Luke Has read Alot Of book of Aegis History.

Can Your Character Mine? - Yes, Luke always Mines For as he Enjoys it and Gets his resources from it.

Are You capable of Building - Not The best But Yes , Luke Has Built some Structures and used to fix up the house when his Dad Was away.

Can you Wield A sword - Yes, Luke Learned how to wield a sword when he was 12

Enjoy Farming? - No, Luke Has Never Enjoyed Farming as He has no Patience.

Does your Character Have Any Special Skill? - Yes Mostly Slaying Creatures and Killing Monsters

Picture Of your skin - I dont Know witch one because on My buddys Application He got denied and one of his reason was His skin dident match his Charachter so here is one for my dwarf I would want to be

http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4ecf1124d61b42513021963695425245109

and heres my regulaur skin

http://www.minershoes.com/skin/view/i4ecdcec60191601361488988691342132413109

Other Information - No that is Basically it Just Thank You For reading my application

[Rhisereld 317]

1. Please put the effort into proofreading your application.

2. Your character is too unrealistic. Avenging parents is a cliche backstory, and it does not make sense for an 8 year old to be able to climb the largest mountain in Aegis.

3. Your dwarven skin is good, but be aware that you will not be able to use your normal skin on LotC.

[brvhrt1005 86]

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Oh well

[Rhisereld 317]

Don't be put off, this only means that your application needs more work. Fix these issues and repost your application in 48 hours. Anybody can get accepted provided they continue to improve their applications, unless the plagarise or get banned.

[brvhrt1005 86]

Ok thank you I will Continue To work on my application I have already worked on it and I improved my Back story and Change it so that a 10 year old (with the help of his father) he climb the Tallest Moutain of all of aegis

=)

I feel pretty confident now