[Denied]Mugrot's application

[cronocio 6]

Out-Of-Character:

-Minecraft Account Name:

cronocio

-Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

No I was not able to go.

-How old are you?:

11

-Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

CST

-Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes, but I slip up on spelling every now and then.

-Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

I am the average hight for my age, I’m skinny, brown eyes, brown hair. I am a christian. I am a black belt it tae kwon do, and I love reading!

-How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

About fourteen hours.

-How long have you played Minecraft?:

One year.

-What do you know about Roleplaying?

What is it?:It is taking up the roll of a character, and experiencing your adventure through their eyes. you could even be someone you might not normally be!

-What do you expect this server will be like?:

I think the server will be full of adventures and action, Big buildings and occasionally some wars.

-What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I have played on 3 servers. The first one was kinda cool, but I left them because almost every one was NPC’s. The second one was my friend’s server. He never has it on so I don’t play on it that much. The third one was webciv. It is a great server and I still play on it, but not as much anymore. I have been playing on LOTC more than webciv. as a wandering soul, of course.

-Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes.

-Name the 4 races on this server:

Human, Orc, Elf, Dwarf are the main races

-How did you hear about us?:

My friend Ethan, Salmeer on LotC, told me about the server.

-What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

Mugrot

In-Character:

-Character Name:

Mugrot.

-What is your Race?:

Orc.

-Biography:

I was born in the cruel winds of the south. A place where no one dares to go. In the ice village of grimclaw. My dad died in an undead attack years before I was born. My mom named me Mugrot. It means war bow, though I never liked the meaning of my name. I seek peace instead of the bloodshed and war that all the other Orcs pursue.

One day our Rex declared war on the Human kingdoms. We had no chance. their forces rained down on us like a never ending storm. My mom gathered all the children and hid us in an ice cave. Every one died except for us. We were saved by sheer luck. An Old Orc took us through the cave system away from Grimclaws. We traveled until we found Aegis. A place at both war, and peace.

We found another orc city near the place called the cloud temple. They gladly excepted us. It was nice there every one loved it. Except for me. These orcs were no different than the ones I had left. Always fighting, always at war with the other races. I, on the other hand, strove for peace with the elves, dwarves, and above all, the humans.

I am now old enough to set out on a journey of my own. I have decided to gather all my things and set out in search of a peaceful land, one devoid of war and bloodshed.

-Character Age:

20 years old

-Character Appearance:

Green skin, Bronze armor, Blue eyes, Black hair, White shoes, Black goatee, Bronze bracers.

-Character Personality:

I strive to be kind-hearted to all who I meet, but I still have orc blood in me, and as such, I am quick to anger. I also try my best to be humble, although, sometimes my natural pride gets in the way

-Your ambitions:

I want To be a more civilized Orc and Travel to towns and city’s. I also wish to be in a guild.

-Can your character read or write?:

Yes, though I prefer reading to righting, mostly because my spelling is not the best.

-Can your character mine?:

Yes, I always feel safe in mines.

-Are you a capable builder?:

Yes. I can build, but I am not as good when it comes to building larger structures.

-Can you wield a sword?:

Although I love peace, I am no fool. I am well trained in the art of the sword.

-Enjoy Farming?:

Having grown up in the icy tundra, I never formed an enjoyment of such tedious tasks.

-Does your character have any special skills?:

I can survive the most harsh temperatures unlike most Orcs. I am a great at stealth.

-A screenshot of your skin:



-Other Information:

I can’t think of anything else.

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge upon World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

Powergaming [X]

Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Status [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Needs Villain Application [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [ ]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Aegis is the world. Not a land you can travel to.

And making large figures such as the warlord, is called powergaming. He didn't actually do it. Grimclaws don't exist either. Don't make up figures.

If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account!

<3

You come to Aegis to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.

[Dat Burkester 101]

Fine just copy me.

[cronocio 6]

Thank you for the feed back so quickly! I will make sure to change that, and post another app in 48 hours! :smile: (hopefully my last)

[salmeer 24]

NICE, copy and past it to Burkester. He may approve it.

[cronocio 6]

thanks!

:razz: