Slowgeden's 1st aplication

slowgeden · December 3, 2011

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: slowgeden

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: England (GMT)

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: I generaly have good grammar but occasionally miss-spell words.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I do not normaly talk about myself, but I get on great with people and like to make new friends. I am an active and suportive online player aswell.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Most days for about 3 hours and on the weekends, about 5-6.

What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?: Roleplaying is an online system, where-by the players act and play as different characters. In this case, players would take the role of the different races and therefor change the way in which they play, talk etc to fit the certain character they are.

What do you expect this server will be like?: Well, if the trailers are anything to go by, then I hope the server to be a real roleplaying experience without having to worry about people randomly killing you and therefor ruining the roleplay. I also want it to be a new roleplaying experience and playing way.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: I have not been in any other server on Minecraft as I wanted this one to be my first and only server to be on.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:I have yes.

How did you hear about us?: I heard about it from friends who already have accounts on it, they told me to look at the trailers.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: slowgeden

In-Character:

Character Name: Nindalf

What is your Race?: Elven

Biography: I was born in a company of wondering druids, I spent about 12 years wondering with them across the land, but I broke away from the company and from then on I have wondered the woods, mountains and deserts alone. I did, from time to time pick up companions for short parts of my travels but soon grew tired of their company and slipped away at the dead of night.

Your characters ambitions: Wishes to learn more about the world that we all live in as I wonder the wilderness.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? I draw my bow, mutter a quick prayer to Malin, and then fire at the bandits.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? "Hello to you to my good man, I am just browsing your wares at the present, I will call if I need assistance."

A screenshot of your skin: http://minecraftskinspro.com/default.asp?action=readreviews&link=8591

Other Information: Not really interested in fighting, however I will fight for the good of my race if the time and need arises.

James Undercroft · December 3, 2011

Your application has been:

Do not worry, though. Everyone gets as many chances as they like; but you have to wait 2 days before posting another application. Reason being it gives people plenty of time to research and make their biography as good as possible, also because if everyone constantly spammed applications after being denied then there would be so many no one could keep track!

These are the things I would like you to expand upon:

-You have missed the question concerning meta-gaming and power-gaming. Please re-read the application form here http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/1035-official-lord-of-the-craft-application-form/ and answer the question in your next application. If you do not know what meta-gaming and power-gaming are then you can google them and find out for yourself. :)

-Your biography is not in-depth enough. It does not exaplain your character appearance, personality or age. Please include all three and do note that:

Elves: Below age 200 is considered not fully mature; age 1000 is
considered relatively old. Note: A 20-year old elf is comparable to a toddler.

I would also love to see some elven or world lore in your biography, you can find all about that here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/index.php?title=Main_Page

-The RP question answers are too short. I would like to see at least a PARAGRAPH for each one. RP out your character in each situation and do not just write: My character would walk in the door.

"Hey! Can I please buy some bread?"

"Sure!"

My character pays the man 5 minas.

"Thank you!"

My character leaves the shop.

Though this is RP, I want to see how good you REALLY ARE and I want you to try as hard as you can.

Good luck :)

Do not post another application within 2 days or that application will be skipped.

Here is some further reading material that can help you get accepted:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/13144-petyrs-guide-to-accepted-server-applications/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/19145-tips-to-include-on-your-application/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/9868-an-extensive-guide-to-the-world-of-aegis/