My Application

[knightjoey9 1]

Ok hopefully i made all of the corrections you wanted.

Out-Of-Character:

Josh

Minecraft Account Name:

Mr_Jack_Mehof

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?:

Sadly, No i did not.

How old are you?:

16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

GMT, USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?:

Yes, I believe i do.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself:

Hello, I am a student at West Bend West Highschool. My hobbies are Skateboarding, Airsofting, and Java coding. I love to work out, and meet new people. I have also been in many other Minecraft RP-Servers.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?:

I will probably be on for around 50 hrs.

What do you know about Roleplaying? What is it?:

Role-playing is when you play as a fictional character. It is mostly associated with fantasy or Medieval role-play.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.

Metagaming is when you know something your character wouldn't and using it, for example, if your friend told you while not playing minecraft where his secret base is and you go on really quick and rob it. Powergaming is if you do something that your character can't, like if your a human and you start flying with wings.

What do you expect this server will be like?:

I believe that this server will be a different take on minecraft allowing more freedom to take the path of ones choosing not just the standard Economy only path. I like RPing and i believe that this server will satisfy my needs quite easily.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?:

I played on many servers, i will list a couple. FsrMinecraft: I left it because the Owner/Admins abused all the time. HexGaming: Not enough people doing things, Like raiding or even playing.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?:

Yes.

How did you hear about us?:

Though Youtube.com

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you?

No.

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?:

knightjoey9

In-Character:

Character Name:

Corix

What is your Race?:

Human

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.):

When he was born his mother was murdered. His father went into a great depression. When he was 15 his father took his own life. Corix was frightened, but not supprised. Once he heard his father talking about taking his life, but he just thought is was a joke. After his father pass away he was alone, until he stumbled upon the land of Aegis. He was greeted by a very friendly Human-Female named Sophia, She tended to his wounds and cared for him until he was old enough to live on his own. When he turned 18 he left her house, they were both so sad, but they new it had to be done at sometime. This guy puts you in mind of an unavoidable bloodhound. He has round brown eyes that are like two bronze coins. His silky, straight, brown hair is mid neck-length and is worn in a businesslike, uncomplicated style. He has an angular build. His skin is Tan. He is a 26 years old. He has an elegant nose and a wide chin. His wardrobe is practical, and is mostly black and Red.

Your characters ambitions:

He is very skillful with the sword.

He trained all the time once he was on his own in the wilderness.

He loves to hear the blade of the sword tear through flesh.

His skills with the bow is quite good.

His speed is equivalent to a wild boar.

His skin is unusually thick.

He will make sure that he does not lose a argument.

He loves the smell and look of money.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do?

He rushes in to assist the elf, and attack the bandits from behind. Then he will be on his way.

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer?

"I require your goods for a certain task that i must accomplish, how much does [desired good] cost?"

Then i would buy it then get on to other business

A screenshot of your skin:

http://www.minecraft...=both&id=151153

Other Information:

[Trouvo 205]

DENIED

Your bio is not very well thought out, lacks personality, development, depth, quirks and flaws.

When he was 15 his father took his own life. Corix was frightened, but not supprised. Once he heard his father talking about taking his life, but he just thought is was a joke

If he was not surprised then why would he have just thought it a joke?

He loves to hear the blade of the sword tear through flesh.

Is your character psychotic? He cant be

His speed is equivalent to a wild boar.

unrealistic/ Overpowered