Condor565's Whitelist Request

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Out-Of-Character:

Minecraft Account Name: condor565

Did you attend minecon and sign up at the LOTC booth?: No

How old are you?: 15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: United States

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: I am very smart and love computer games. I would one day like to become one of three things, A Computer Engineer, Computer Programmer, or a Computer Security Specialist. And everyone I know either respects me or doesn't know me.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: 24 hours

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you.:It means to be in a perspective of playing a role of someone you are not.

In your own Words, describe what Metagaming and Powergaming are.I think powergaming is a way of interacting with games or game-like things with the aim of maximising progress towards a specific goal.

What do you expect this server will be like?: I think this server will be a server that follows all the rules, And will feel like you are actully in the game in Medival Ages.

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Pretty much every sever I could find. I found none of them satisfing.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes

Have you voted for the Lord of the Craft on Minestatus? Which vote number were you? Yes, 2,122. (I think that is what you mean)

What is your The Lord Of Craft forum account name?: condor565

In-Character:

Character Name: Coldwell

What is your Race?: Human

Biography(This should include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): My character Coldwell was born in the alley ways of Oren. His father was at one point promoted to be the squir of the king. Then his father killed was by the king and Coldwell was framed. Once that happend the king banished him from the kingdom. A old farm lady found him wandering and brought him in, and took care of him. Years later at the age of 21 Coldwell decides that he will not rest until he has vengence on the king or his family. Anyone that gives him respect will be respected back, and anyone who gets in his way will be kill or punished.

Your characters ambitions: Getting vengence on the king of Oren or his family. And becoming a Neutral-Evil kinda guy.

Out in the Wilds, your character comes across a small cottage. Outside, there appears to be an elf struggling combat with two bandits. What does your character do? Runs over to the bandits and kills them and tells the man "give me a reward or you die to."

Your character walks up to a shop in the middle of Al'Khazar. "Hello, my good sir!" says the shop owner. "What may I help you with today?" How does your character answer? I would like to browse your finest goods!(and if he had what i wanted but i couldent afford it i would kill him, If he had what i wanted and i could afford it I would buy it and swindle my money back.

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Other Information: None

[Mercius 15]

Denied.

Your definition of metagaming is missing and your definition of powergaming is copied and pasted from Wikipedia. Please put more effort into your application, we do check for plagiarism. Putting "I think" in front of it does not make it your own words.

All of your application could use expanding, the definition of roleplay, biography, ambitions. Your whole character section. Take your time on it and remember it's better to write too much than too little.

Don't copy and paste anything please, all your own words. You may re-apply in 48 hours, good luck!

[Mercius 15]

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